Dear Melinda,
Thank you for your interest in your application. Before I can approve you, I need you to expand more on her biography.
1. You requested first or second year, but mentioned that Melinda is thirteen. If she is thirteen, then she should be in third year.
2. Who is Michael Westshire? I assumed that he was Melinda's father? Can you please include this information. You can also expand on Jackson if you like. You can also expand on some more information that would flesh out her history more completely such as: How did her parents killed? Why? Wouldn't the aurors be searching for the murderer?
3. Since Melinda is thirteen, she has to have a guardian. I doubt that they would allow underage kids (of murdered parents) to live by themselves. Does she has a family? Was she adopted into another family?
4. Please include your sample RP in response to James or Astrid.
If you are not sure about this, please have a look at our sample applications
here.
Regards,
Timothy