Hi Vera!
Welcome to Hoggies! Your application looks great so far and I can't wait to see Vera around the boards! There is just one thing we'll need you to revise and then we can get you accepted.
In role-plays, we ask that people write their posts in past tense and third person, as specified in the following rule:
Please write in third person past tense (e.g. 'she walked in').
You wrote the sample in third person, but if you could revise your tenses to be on past tense, that would be great!
Once you've made those changes, please reply here with your entire revised application and we can get you accepted.
If you have any questions or need any help, feel free to contact me or another member of staff.
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