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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Dodger Winbolt
« on: 18/06/2014 at 12:41 »
Accepted!
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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Extension.« on: 04/06/2014 at 13:14 »
I hope you feel better soon! Don't stress about the application, just take your time and get better first.
- Collin 4
Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Newton MacDonald - Adult« on: 28/05/2014 at 14:59 »
Hi Newt,
Thanks for taking the time to address the above. Your application is looking great and I'm looking forward to seeing Newt around the site. He's more than welcome to come pay St Mungo's a visit, if he likes! Before I accept you, I just have one question. The weapon that Newt used to find Mr Lark with and which also killed his sister, is that still in his position? It's a very interesting object, but also quite a powerful one, so if you wish to use it on the site, I'll have to ask you to please submit a special request form by PM to one of the site admins. Thank you. - Collin O'Reilly 6
Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Antonio Yzarduy« on: 14/05/2014 at 14:11 »
Hello Antonio and welcome back to HS.net.
Your application is looking great! However, before I can accept you, I will need you to make just a tiny adjustment to Antonio's levels. An extra point seems to have sneaked its way into the application making the total 33 instead of 32. If you can let me know by posting here what his adjusted levels should be, I'll get you accepted right away! - Collin O'Reilly 7
Archived Applications / Re: Quinton Stalk« on: 01/05/2014 at 04:10 »
Mr Stalk,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly Please keep in mind that when Quinton is younger than 11 he might have accidental bursts of magic, but that would never be anything big or complicated, and not something that would usually happen often either. A flying book or a cup busting are the things that might happen. Therefore his adoptive mother and father might very well teach him about magic, but they would not actually be able to teach him magic itself until he has turned 11. 8
Archived Applications / Re: Cosmina Laskos - Hogwarts Student Application« on: 30/04/2014 at 14:15 »
Miss Laskos,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly 9
Archived Applications / Re: Veralidaine Baeol« on: 30/04/2014 at 13:55 »
Miss Baeol,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly 10
Archived Applications / Re: Cosmina Laskos - Hogwarts Student Application« on: 30/04/2014 at 13:53 »
Hello Miss Laskos,
Your application is looking awesome! However, if Cosmina was born in 1931 she would only just have turned 10 and would not have received a letter to Hogwarts yet. If you could just adjust that to perhaps 1930, I'll get you accepted right away! - Collin O'Reilly 11
Archived Applications / Re: Venadikt Borovksy - Hogwarts Student Application« on: 30/04/2014 at 13:29 »
Mr Borovsky,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly 12
Archived Applications / Re: Veralidaine Baeol« on: 30/04/2014 at 12:56 »
I'm glad I was able to help! Having something accidentally transform into a cup is a much simpler form of magic and would be perfectly okay and also in line with the Harry Potter canon. If you can edit that, it'd be great, and I'll go ahead and get you accepted!
Your roleplay response is looking great. It's perfectly fine to include something someone else said when you write a post, and you'll notice than many people do so when roleplaying. After all, including James' sentences in your post makes it easy to see what Daine is replying to! A simple way to separate someone else's dialogue from that of your own character can be to either bold it or use italics, but that entirely up to you. I hope that helped! - Collin O'Reilly 13
Archived Applications / Re: Cassandra Chant« on: 30/04/2014 at 04:58 »
Miss Chant,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly, 14
Archived Applications / Re: Veralidaine Baeol« on: 30/04/2014 at 04:44 »
Hello Veraldaine,
Welcome to Hogwarts! Your application is looking great, and I can't wait to see how Daine will get along at school. Before we can accept you, there're just a few things I'd like you to address. Firstly, when younger children show their magic by accident, it's usually just little things, like hair growing longer or a book floating. To manage to transfigure something into a live animal is pretty advanced magic and it would be very unlikely that Daine could manage that. If you could please adjust this a little, that would be great! I'd also like you to have another look at your roleplay response. Whereas your post is looking great, we are actually looking for you to reply to either of the posts below. Imagine if Daine comes across either James or Astrid in the castle - what will she think and how will she react? Quote Option I: While writing please also keep in mind that quidditch captains are actually roleplayed characters at the castle, so it might be a good idea to avoid statements like "the quidditch captain said...", to avoid accidentally powerplaying those characters. Please rewrite your roleplay response to answer one of the posts above and repost it in this thread, then well be happy to take another look at your application! Once again, welcome to Hogwarts! - Collin O'Reilly 15
Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Rhiannon-Raeghan C. Heidenrich,nee Deiderich« on: 24/04/2014 at 06:07 »
Hello Rhiannon and welcome to HS.net!
Your application is looking off to a really good start, and Rhiannon sounds like a very interesting young lady! However, before we can accept you, there're just a few things we need you to address. Firstly, we ask that your account name will be the same as that of your character (first and second name, plus any middle names if you wish). You can post a helpdesk ticket here with your choice of name and we'll be happy to help you change it. Secondly, your levels are a little unbalanced. Usually when starting with a new character we try to keep our highest level no more than double of our lowest (so if your highest is C12, your lowest can't be less than 6). If you could please edit your levels to reflect that, that'd be great. However, if you do wish for Rhiannon to have unbalanced levels, please submit a special request form to an admin with a reason why, and they'll get back to you as soon as possible. Performing non-verbal magic is also a skill that requires a special request. If you wish for Rhiannon to be able to do so, please PM this form to an admin and they'll be happy to look through it for you. Your biography is looking great and I can't wait to hear more about Rhiannon. Something you might wish to consider is that even though we are roleplaying in a magical universe we try to keep our characters as realistic as possible. No one is a super hero or can do everything perfectly, we all have our little faults and weak points. That's what makes us balanced people. You have written a lot about what Rhiannon does well, but I'm curious to know a bit about her weak points and the things she doesn't do so well too! In that connection I'm also curious to hear a little more about the unbreakable vow! What does it include and how does it affect Rhiannon? Lastly, you are mentioning dark spells and have indicated quite a few times that several people have been handicapped, sentenced to death or even died, leaving it sounding as if Rhiannon is a murderer. With our site rating in mind, I'll have to ask you to please tone this down a bit, and also keep in mind that as per our site rules:
Please address the above and repost your application below, and we'll be happy to take another look at your it! Once again, welcome to HS.net! - Collin O'Reilly 16
Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Hana Sato« on: 23/04/2014 at 15:24 »
Congratulations, this application has been accepted!
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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Hana Sato« on: 23/04/2014 at 14:26 »
Hello Hana,
Your application is looking awesome and I can't wait to see how Hana will get by now that she's in England. She sounds like quite an interesting girl! That said, before we can accept you, you do have one part of Hana's bio run very close to our site rating, which is PG-13 and states that "Abuse of minors should not be directly described or mentioned." If you could please address the end of your "5 February 1941" section with that in mind, it'd be great. If you have any questions, you are welcome to send me a PM. - Collin 18
Archived Applications / Re: Mjolnira (Nara) Elipton« on: 18/04/2014 at 03:49 »
Miss Elipton,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly, Yes, you are only permitted one student character at Hogwarts, however you can choose to use your Gringrotts points to buy a second one. 19
Archived Applications / Re: Jeremy Monroe« on: 16/04/2014 at 13:35 »
Mr Monroe,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly, 20
Archived Applications / Re: Evelyn Takamura« on: 16/04/2014 at 11:44 »
Miss Takamura,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 May 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School. Regards,
Collin O'Reilly, |