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Archived Applications / Re: Anastasii Pavlovich
« on: 02/10/2013 at 13:18 »
Hi Anastasii!
Welcome to HS-net! Your application looks great, but we need to make a small adjustment to the application before we can approve Anastasii.
In your roleplaying response, you have said that Anastasii helps up the other person (the NPC, Amelia). In a roleplay, we are able to control our own actions but never the actions of other characters (without their permission). By writing that you have helped her up, you have controlled the outcome of her character's actions. This is also called powerplaying, which we do not allow in roleplaying without permission from the other characters.
To avoid powerplaying the other character, you can offer her help to get back up but also leave room for her to stubbornly deny help.
Please make the adjustment to your roleplaying response and then post your entire application again as a reply to this thread, thanks Anastasii!
Welcome to HS-net! Your application looks great, but we need to make a small adjustment to the application before we can approve Anastasii.
In your roleplaying response, you have said that Anastasii helps up the other person (the NPC, Amelia). In a roleplay, we are able to control our own actions but never the actions of other characters (without their permission). By writing that you have helped her up, you have controlled the outcome of her character's actions. This is also called powerplaying, which we do not allow in roleplaying without permission from the other characters.
To avoid powerplaying the other character, you can offer her help to get back up but also leave room for her to stubbornly deny help.
Please make the adjustment to your roleplaying response and then post your entire application again as a reply to this thread, thanks Anastasii!
Regards,
Galatea Argent,
Editor-in-Chief of the Daily Prophet
Galatea Argent,
Editor-in-Chief of the Daily Prophet