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Adults & Children / Re: Circe Locus Elsewhere Child application
« on: 20/03/2025 at 23:17 »
Hi Circe!
Welcome to Hoggies! I apologize for the delay in responding to you.
Your application looks great so far! There are just a couple of changes we'll need you to make before we can get you accepted.
1) Your biography should be 100+ words. So if you could add some more detail to your biography (you could describe what her time at Ilvelmory, or her family life for instance), that would be great.
2) Your role-play response should be at least 9 sentences to give us a better sense of how you role-play. If you could expand on your sample, that would be great. You could describe Circe's thoughts, what she was doing before hand, if she actually wants to play.
If you could reply to this post with your entire revised application once you've finished, that would be great.
Welcome to Hoggies! I apologize for the delay in responding to you.
Your application looks great so far! There are just a couple of changes we'll need you to make before we can get you accepted.
1) Your biography should be 100+ words. So if you could add some more detail to your biography (you could describe what her time at Ilvelmory, or her family life for instance), that would be great.
2) Your role-play response should be at least 9 sentences to give us a better sense of how you role-play. If you could expand on your sample, that would be great. You could describe Circe's thoughts, what she was doing before hand, if she actually wants to play.
If you could reply to this post with your entire revised application once you've finished, that would be great.