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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Its Been Awhile.
« on: 31/05/2016 at 14:26 »
Well I'm pretty sure I'm not gonna retire him, I am however retiring my other character Grick. Thank you for the help though! Maybe we can thread once I've got Grimm set back up? I'm also working on an Elsewhere kid who'll be a first year next term, two times the fun!  :)

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Suggestions & Questions / Its Been Awhile.
« on: 21/05/2016 at 21:54 »
It has been a while, good year and a half to two years. And yet whenever I think of the Harry Potter universe I cannot help but think of this site. I want to apologize to any admins I possibly caused trouble for in the past because I know I no doubt stepped on toes when I was here before. Since I've been gone so long I was wondering what I should do as as getting back up to speed? And as far as getting Grimm set back up for roleplaying? Or would it be better to just retire him and start over with a new character? Also as far as retiring characters goes I'm assuming I'd still need do that with my other character since I don't have any plans to keep him? Any help would be greatly appreciated. I hope we can enjoy exciting and interesting roleplays in the near future.    :)

Grimm Palatar

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Archived Applications / Grimm Palatar
« on: 01/08/2014 at 03:05 »


Application for Hogwarts School




→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.

Name:

Grimm Palatar

Birthday:

July 28, 1928

Hometown:

Godrics Hollow

Bloodline:

Pureblood

Magical Strength (pick one):

Charms

Magical Weakness (pick one):

Divination

Year (pick two):

1:4th year(preferred)

2:5th year

Biography:

Growing up in Godric's Hollow Grimm had learned of magic from his father, who was an Auror and his mother, who was a nurse at St. Mungo's. When Grimm turned seven his magical abilities began to show. Small items around him would start floating and with the rare instant where big items would float, this wouldn't happen for very long. When he was nine bigger items like books would float off bookshelves towards him. Grimm went to a library one day to relieve the stress of hearing the news that he may have to move. When a book started to float off the shelf which happened alot when he was angry or stressed, but this book was different, when he went to put it back it started to change from a children's book to a black leather bound book the title was "An Introduction to Spells for Children" Grimm thought "This must be one of those enchanted books Dad told me be about. It seems like a normal book to muggles but to people that can use magic its completely different." Then curiosity overcame his sense of caution and he began to read it. As he read the last page the book started floating again transformed back into a normal children's book and fell to the floor. Wanting to know more about spells Grimm asked his father where to find more books on the subject his father then took him to a wizard library with books on all types of magical things. After reading several books on spells, Grimm began to study their mechanics and how to improve they worked him being a quiet child with no friends didn't really hurt his social standing. A few months after his eleventh birthday his parents moved to Diagon Alley so that they could be closer to work. Shortly after their move to Diagon Alley his mother went on a trip to America and brought back a leather jacket, this would ended up allowing Grimm to come out of his shell. Soon he was flirting with girls and getting into trouble. He spent most of his first yeardoing just that, causing trouble for the prefects and flirting with the female professors as well as other girls at the school. But when London was about to be bombed and he was on his way to a shelter he was taken by his grandfather's servants to the families manor in the country where he took shelter from the bombs. Garand his grandfather later explained that due to the war and what happened to Beuaxbatons and Salem he would be privately tutored at the Palatar manor. Grimm stayed there for nearly three years being tutored by the best of the best until his father was severly injured in the war and sent home.

If you are applying to be a fourth year or above, your biography must be at least three hundred words long.


→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.

Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request:

Slytherin

Personality:

Charming, Witty, Headstrong, Rebellious, Mischievous, Prankster

Appearance:

Tall for his age and of light build. His hair is a light brown also fairly thick and his eyes are a dark hazel with flecks of lighter hazel. A leather jacket is a central part of his wardrobe.

→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.

Please reply to one of the Sample Roleplays below.

Option 2: Grimm was walking down the hallway when he heard a female voice behind him yell "Hey. Wait up! It's for the paper!" He turned to see a girl about his age run towards him when she reached him she said "What do you think about serving frog legs at lunch? Some say it’s a delicacy, but others think it’s plain gross." Grimm smiled so this was Astrid Bixby he had heard she wrote the school paper and she is as beautiful as the boys in the dormitory had said his smile was full of a charm that could make the first year girls weak kneed, his eyes slightly hinting at danger, his unkempt hair hinting at a his wild side but he just smiled "Personally I prefer more traditional foods but I am sure I can speak for all of Hogwarts when I say it certainly does not taste like chicken. Perhaps we could talk over a glass of butterbeer? By the way the names Grimm, Grimm Palatar."

→ ABOUT YOU.

Previous Characters (if applicable):

Grimm Palatar, Grick Fellerton, and Vibuerus Blackrose

How did you find us?:

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Levels?
« on: 27/07/2014 at 16:06 »
Okay thanks that clears up my confusion then

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Levels?
« on: 26/07/2014 at 22:01 »
Okay so I went back and reread the rules for how to do it and with you answering my first question my only confusion is can Grimm get levels for doing private threads as a student because it's a little fuzzy on that? Oh and to answer your question it was Verity Cassandra last term.

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Suggestions & Questions / Levels?
« on: 26/07/2014 at 04:25 »
Okay since I have gotten some time to get use to the site again I figure I should try to straighten out my profile since I didn't play Grimm for about three terms IC and so my question is how do I go about fixing his levels. Also, another quick one here since I know there is a way to gain levels in elsewhere I saw another student who had done it, can someone explain that a bit more and tell me if Grimm would qualifiy for that cause the way its worded is weird. Thanks! :)

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Gringotts Exchange
« on: 14/07/2014 at 16:20 »
Alright right thanks

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Suggestions & Questions / Gringotts Exchange
« on: 14/07/2014 at 04:26 »
Hey I was looking at the Gringotts Exchange and noticed that Grimm didn't have an account when I had nearly completed a term (ic year) here before having to take a leave of absence due to rl matters so I was wondering is there an archive for that or was it never made? Because there were some things I had done that I not knowing at the time should have got points for.

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Chatbox?
« on: 13/07/2014 at 03:30 »
That suuuuucks I got a tablet for Christmas while I was gone and the old computer I was using shorted out (literally). Well thanks for telling me Charlie and hey if you ever feel like threading with Grimm pm me.

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Chatbox?
« on: 12/07/2014 at 02:23 »
Well okay it appeared for awhile which is weird but then it went away can anyone help me with this I want to see whats going on in the chat room?

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Chatbox?
« on: 11/07/2014 at 04:04 »
Question how do you get to the chat room on tablets? I've looked but can't find it.

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Suggestions & Questions / A Long Absence
« on: 22/01/2014 at 05:10 »
I have just been absent from the site for about two months now so around the time of the Winter Fete was bombed and i was gone for so long because my parents had been switching internet companies and there were problems. So now that I am back I'm not entirely sure if I am in Hogwarts and if I would be able to get levels and things since my internet was cut off half way through the "year" and I wasn't able to complete my classes.

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Merlin's Order of Defense

CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Grick Fellerton
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Blood Status (choose one): Pureblood

Education: 
Graduated from Salem

Residence:
An unknown location in Europe

Division:
Grick had heard of Circe's Wolves but he thought of them as more of tricksters then soldiers so he had decided to enlist in The Crying Augureys hoping that they were more of soldiers then the other brigade. He had done his research on the brigade and decided that since he would rather enlist into a brigade that had a name that had to do with death.

Rank:
Grick had been in an army before when he was in the American army and he has learned how to work while there are people yelling, bombs exploding, and guns firing. Of course he knew that a wizarding war would be different from a muggle war since there would be spells flying instead of bullets and missiles. He has a reputation for getting into fights but he is one of the best at getting the job. His dieing pureblood family still gives him a chance at a higher rank.

Specialty:
If applying for any special skill (Reconnaissance Officer/Signal Engineer/Codebreaker, etc.), please include a reasoning of over 100 words.

Requested Magical Levels:  (see here on how to do this)
If you want levels above the usual 32 total, please fill out and submit the Special Request form here.
  • Charms: 8
  • Divination: 7
  • Transfiguration: 6
  • Summoning: 11

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:
Grimm Palatar

Biography: (300 words minimum.)
Grick had lived in the US all his life but he never knew about magic seeing as both of his parents where muggles he and his family lived in New York for most of his life. When he was younger around nine years old random things would happen unexplainable things and then his parents died in a car accident. Soon after he found out he had a rich grandfather who was a business man that lived in America. When Grick moved in with his grandfather he was told about magic and was told that he was a halfblood because his grandfather was a pureblood but his family was almost all dead. At age twelve Grick's grandfather sent him to Salem where he got into trouble for fighting with pureblood elitists. After graduating he traveled around not knowing what to do with his life he finally settled in America and enlisted into the American army but was kicked out for fighting. Shortly after getting dishonorable discharged his grandfather died and after mourning his grandfathers death he decided to find out more about his pureblood family. He searched for years and finally found out that his grandfather owned a mansion the location of it was lost along with the rest of the pureblood family. Shortly after he found the mansion he found out the reason it was lost was because of the very powerful security charms surrounding it making it virtually invisible. He found many documents about his family and found out that he was actually a pureblood but was put up for adoption by his father when he was a child because his real mother died while giving birth. He then spent a year looking for his real father when he found him his father was died already and had moved away from America and married a muggle. Then Grick heard of the wizarding war going on and as an attempt to escape from his past he enlisted.

Roleplay:

Option 2: Grick sneaked through the trenches his wand at the ready. He heard footsteps up ahead and signaled to the squad to slow. He was on a mission to bring back a captured Reconnaissance officer. He slowly began to sneak forward to see who it was when all of a sudden a man rushed through the trench towards Grick's squad. Grick signaled to his men to keep a watch out in case it was a trap. As he reached the man he began to talk "I am Private Trevor Mckenlly I was captured by the enemy but i managed to escape." the man said in a panicked voice.

Grick tried to calm him "Its alright son I'm Sergeant Grick we were sent to get you out." he said as he motioned to one of the field medics "Kedson get over here and make sure this man is ok." Then he saw a ball of magic flying towards Trevor. Quickly he shoved the private behind him "Protego!" and he yelled to one of the fireteams under his command "You guys get him back to base we will hold them off!" The other fireteam joined him in repelling the enemy then Grick glanced to the right and saw a fire pit that had been abandoned. He pointed towards the men rushing towards them "Arcesso Fire!" the fire from the fire pit shot towards the rushing men making a wall of fire. Quickly he turned and began to run back through the trenches towards base camp "Come on boys lets get back to base!"



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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Grick Fellerton Elsewhere Adult
« on: 06/09/2013 at 19:28 »

E L S E W H E R E   A D U L T

CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Grick Fellerton
Gender: Male
Age: 38

Education: 
Graduated from Salem

Residence:
Unknown location in Europe

Occupation:**If you are planning to work at St. Mungo's, please fill out the St. Mungo's application here instead.
No

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the Ministry, Shrieking Shack) or to take over an existing shop in need of new management?
No

Requested Magic Levels: (see here on how to do this)
If you want levels above the usual 32 total, please fill out and submit the Special Request form here.
  • Charms: 8
  • Divination: 7
  • Transfiguration: 6
  • Summoning: 11
Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
No

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:
Grimm Palatar

Biography: (300 words minimum.)
Grick had lived in the US all his life but he never knew about magic seeing as both of his parents where muggles he and his family lived in New York for most of his life. When he was younger around nine years old random things would happen unexplainable things and then his parents died in a car accident. Soon after he found out he had a rich grandfather who was a business man that lived in America. When Grick moved in with his grandfather he was told about magic and was told that he was a halfblood because his grandfather was a pureblood but his family was almost all dead. At age twelve Grick's grandfather sent him to Salem where he got into trouble for fighting with pureblood elitists. After graduating he traveled around not knowing what to do with his life he finally settled in America and enlisted into the American army but was kicked out for fighting. Shortly after getting dishonorable discharged his grandfather died and after mourning his grandfathers death he decided to find out more about his pureblood family. He searched for years and finally found out that his grandfather owned a mansion the location of it was lost along with the rest of the pureblood family. Shortly after he found the mansion he found out the reason it was lost was because of the very powerful security charms surrounding it making it virtually invisible. He found many documents about his family and found out that he was actually a pureblood but was put up for adoption by his father when he was a child because his real mother died while giving birth. He then spent a year looking for his real father when he found him his father was died already and had moved away from America and married a muggle. Then Grick heard of the wizarding war going on and as an attempt to escape from his past he enlisted.

Roleplay: (If you are requesting Exceptional levels - above 32 total - please respond to the roleplay and questions here instead)
Reply as your character to the following:

It was impossible for Dianne to stay out of trouble. It wasn't that she was looking for trouble, it's just that trouble always managed to find her. Today she wished she could find something equally familiar but more comforting.

The five-year old girl hugged her puffskein closer to her and brushed her face in its soft fur for comfort. She had named him herself and he was always her special pet. No she was certain she had never gone down this side street before. Her anxiety increased every second as darkness fell as she walked down the road. A loud noise came to her left and she buried her face in her pet's fur completely. The scared girl bolted the opposite way slamming the both of them into the wall of the nearest building. Tottering back a few steps she found a door a few feet to her right and ran to open it. What light there was inside spilled out into the darkness and she spilled into the room.

Once in, she was caught between the impulse to curl her cloak up more tightly around her and loosen her grip on it. She wasn't alone anymore but she was now among strangers instead, which was nearly as terrifying. Her puffskein had recovered from the shock of the wall and now was purring contentedly as the girl hugged it, causing a mildly calming effect on the girl. Gathering her courage, she marched up to the nearest person, pulled on the nearest clothing hem and blurted out in a loud voice:

"I'm lost and it's dark and I wanted to know where I am but I'm not scared but I am worried that Sambundeakin is scared because he's little and needs something to eat and wants to go home."

She paused to draw a breath in her nearly never-ending sentence, "He misses my and his mommy."

To explain the scared girl held up the custard-colored puffskein. Sambundeakin the puffskein, however simply purred as if nothing on earth was wrong in the world.

Roleplay Response:
Grick was out buying supplies and was taking a shortcut when someone bumped into him. He turned around and saw a little girl standing there making Grick's scowl turn into a grin. "Are you okay kid?" Grick said as he looked around for the girl's parents seeing nobody he turned back to the girl "Where are your parents?" Then the girl began to talk really fast "Well had you kept going in the direction you were going you would have entered a very bad place," he said as he pointed to the sign that said "Knockturn Alley" "I'm guessing you want to go this way to get home. Here I'll walk with you." Grick offered knowing that since they were close to Knockturn Alley it wouldn't be smart to let her go alone.

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Elsewhere Accepted / Grick Fellerton Elsewhere Adult
« on: 06/09/2013 at 04:26 »

E L S E W H E R E   A D U L T

CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Grick Fellerton
Gender: Male
Age: 38

Education: 
Graduated from Salem

Residence:
Knockturn Alley

Occupation:**If you are planning to work at St. Mungo's, please fill out the St. Mungo's application here instead.
Type your response here

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the Ministry, Shrieking Shack) or to take over an existing shop in need of new management?
No

Requested Magic Levels: (see here on how to do this)
If you want levels above the usual 32 total, please fill out and submit the Special Request form here.
  • Charms: 8
  • Divination: 6
  • Transfiguration: 7
  • Summoning: 11
Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
No

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:
Grimm Palatar

Biography: (300 words minimum.)
Grick had lived in the US all his life but he never knew about magic. He lived in New York. When he was younger around nine years old random things would happen unexplainable things and then his parents died in a car accident. Soon after his great uncle moved to America and told Grick about magic and sent him off to Salem where he would spend the next three years of his life learning about magic. After graduating he traveled around not knowing what to do with his life but after hearing about the wizarding part of the war starting Grick signed up but ended up getting only very little experience in battle. After the war was over he began to wonder again and heard of another wizarding war he rushed back hoping to join the fight after his time wondering.

Roleplay: (If you are requesting Exceptional levels - above 32 total - please respond to the roleplay and questions here instead)
Reply as your character to the following:

It was impossible for Dianne to stay out of trouble. It wasn't that she was looking for trouble, it's just that trouble always managed to find her. Today she wished she could find something equally familiar but more comforting.

The five-year old girl hugged her puffskein closer to her and brushed her face in its soft fur for comfort. She had named him herself and he was always her special pet. No she was certain she had never gone down this side street before. Her anxiety increased every second as darkness fell as she walked down the road. A loud noise came to her left and she buried her face in her pet's fur completely. The scared girl bolted the opposite way slamming the both of them into the wall of the nearest building. Tottering back a few steps she found a door a few feet to her right and ran to open it. What light there was inside spilled out into the darkness and she spilled into the room.

Once in, she was caught between the impulse to curl her cloak up more tightly around her and loosen her grip on it. She wasn't alone anymore but she was now among strangers instead, which was nearly as terrifying. Her puffskein had recovered from the shock of the wall and now was purring contentedly as the girl hugged it, causing a mildly calming effect on the girl. Gathering her courage, she marched up to the nearest person, pulled on the nearest clothing hem and blurted out in a loud voice:

"I'm lost and it's dark and I wanted to know where I am but I'm not scared but I am worried that Sambundeakin is scared because he's little and needs something to eat and wants to go home."

She paused to draw a breath in her nearly never-ending sentence, "He misses my and his mommy."

To explain the scared girl held up the custard-colored puffskein. Sambundeakin the puffskein, however simply purred as if nothing on earth was wrong in the world.

Roleplay Response:
Grick was out buying supplies and was taking a shortcut when someone bumped into him. He turned around and saw a little girl standing there making Grick's scowl turn into a grin. "Are you okay kid?" Grick said as he looked around for the girl's parents seeing nobody he turned back to the girl "Where are your parents?" Then the girl began to talk really fast "Well had you kept going in the direction you were going you would have entered a very bad place," he said as he pointed to the sign that said "Knockturn Alley" "I'm guessing you want to go this way to get home. Here I'll walk with you." Grick offered knowing that since they were close to Knockturn Alley it wouldn't be smart to let her go alone.

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Suggestions & Questions / Class Suggestion For Hogwarts
« on: 05/09/2013 at 03:52 »
I thought since there are all those other classes on Potions and Muggle Studies why shouldn't there be one on wandmaking? So I would like to suggest that it be added as a class next term.

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Archived Applications / Re: Grimm Palatar
« on: 12/08/2013 at 21:48 »
I believe the changes I made to it should explain why this happened.

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Archived Applications / Grimm Palatar
« on: 10/08/2013 at 21:41 »

Application for Hogwarts School




→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.
Name: Grimm Palatar

Birthday: July 28, 1926

Hometown: Godrick's Hollow

Bloodline: Pureblood
Muggleborn / Halfblood / Pureblood / Unknown

Magical Strength (pick one): Charms
Divination / Transfiguration / Charms / Conjuring & Summoning

Magical Weakness (pick one): Divination
Divination / Transfiguration / Charms / Conjuring & Summoning

Year (pick two): Year 1, Year 2

Biography: Growing up in Godric's Hollow Grimm has already learned of magic from his father who is an Auror and his mother who is a nurse at St. Mungo's. When Grimm turned seven his magical abilities began to show. Small items around him would start floating and every once in a while big items would float not for very long though. When he was 9 bigger items like books would float off bookshelves towards him. Grimm went to a library one day to relieve the stress of hearing the news that he may have to move. When  a book started to float off the shelf which happened alot when he was angry or stressed but this book was different when he went to put it back it started to change from a children's book to a black leather bound book the title was "An Introduction to Spells for Children" Grimm thought "This must be one of those enchanted books Dad told me be about. It seems like a normal book to muggles but to people that can use magic its completely different." Then curiosity overcame his sense of caution and he began to read it. As he read the last page the book started floating again transformed back into a normal children's book and fell to the floor. Wanting to know more about spells Grimm asked his father where to find more books on the subject his father then took him to a wizard library with books on all types of magical things. After reading many books about spells Grimm began to study them and how to improve their power him being a quiet child with no friends didn't really hurt his social standing. A few months after his eleventh birthday his parents moved to Diagon Alley so that they could be closer to work.
If you are applying to be a first, second, or third year, your biography must be at least one hundred words long.
If you are applying to be a fourth year or above, your biography must be at least three hundred words long.


→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Slytherin

Personality: Grimm is quiet and headstrong. He prefers action over anything and trys to learn all the magic he can. When he talks to people he is charming and tends to flirt with females he finds attractive. He is always aware of his surroundings.

Appearance: Grimm is tall with short, brown hair that is spiked in the front and has broad shoulders.

→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
Please reply to one of the Sample Roleplays below.
Option 2: Grimm was walking down the hallway when he heard a female voice behind him yell "Hey. Wait up! It's for the paper!" He turned to see a girl about his age run towards him when she reached him she said "What do you think about serving frog legs at lunch? Some say it’s a delicacy, but others think it’s plain gross." Grimm smiled so this was Astrid Bixby he had heard she wrote the school paper and she is as beautiful as the boys in the dormitory had said he immediately turned on his charms "Personally I prefer more traditional foods but I am sure I can speak for all of Hogwarts when I say it certainly does not taste like chicken. Perhaps we could talk over a glass of butterbeer. My names Grimm by the way, Grimm Palatar."


→ ABOUT YOU.

Previous Characters (if applicable): None

How did you find us?: Google


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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Grimm Palatar: Elsewhere Child
« on: 07/06/2013 at 13:44 »
E L S E W H E R E   C H I L D

CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name:Grimm Palatar

Gender:Male

Age:11

Bloodline:Pureblood
Pureblood/Halfblood/Muggleborn/Squib

Parents/Guardians (Are they currently played characters?):
Type your response here. Stella Palatar and Keleo Palatar (not currently played characters)

Residence:
Type your response here - where does your character live? Diagon Alley

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the daycare)?
Type your response here. No

Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
Type your response here. No

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:
Type your response here. None

Biography: (100 words minimum.)
Type your response here. Growing up in Godric's Hollow Grimm has already learned of magic from his father who is an Auror and his mother who is a nurse at St. Mungo's. When Grimm turned seven his magical abilities began to show. Small items around him would start floating and every once in a while big items would float not for very long though. When he was 9 bigger items like books would float off bookshelves towards him.When Grimm was at a library one day and a book started to float off the shelf which is normal but this book was different as it started to change from a children's book to a black leather bound book the title was "An Introduction to Spells for Children" Grimm thought "This must be one of those enchanted books Dad told me be about. It seems like a normal book to muggles but to people that can use magic its completely different." Then curiosity overcame his sense of caution and he began to read it. As he read the last page the book started floating again transformed back into a normal children's book and floated back onto a shelf. Wanting to know more about spells Grimm asked his father where to find more books on the subject his father then took him to a wizard library with books on all types of magical things. After reading many books about spells Grimm began to study them and how to improve their power him being a quiet child with no friends didn't really hurt his social standing. A few months after his eleventh birthday his parents moved to Diagon Alley so that they could be closer to work.

Roleplay:
Reply as your character to the following:

Godric Park.

Overhead, the sky was a crisp blue, for once clear of the ever-pervasive spongy clouds and rain. The sun was a lemony-yellow presence, high in the Eastern sky, and in front of it zipped three broomsticks in a straight line, or something very like one. One... two..... three... the boys passed, their shouts of excitement echoing as they chased the snitch, a tiny shimmer reflecting the sunlight.

Far below was another, much smaller broomstick.

It trugged along the ground, hugging close to it like a sluggish choo choo train and occasionally shuttering in protest. This was because said stick was currently being occupied by a very small girl who was tugging upward on the front of it with all her might, trying to coax it into doing what it had been expressly designed NOT to do.

"John, I said wait up!" The tiny girl squealed, giving the broomstick another tug.

Begrudgingly, it drifted upward a foot, and then sank, depositing the troublesome girl safely on the ground. Janey Hurst was not pleased. In a huff, she hopped off the toy safety broom, grabbing it firmly and thrusting it handle first into the turf.

Her brother was such a beast. He NEVER let her play! She folded her arms, seething blue eyes fixing on another figure nearby.  "You!" She barked, much more sharply than she meant to.

"...Do you want to play?"

Roleplay Response:
Type your response here. Grimm's mother had told him before she left for work "Grimm I need you to pick up some groceries for me there is list in here and along with some money." Once his mom left Grimm picked up the list and money. As he walked to the store he passed a park. Grimm noticed three people flying around the park on brooms below them was a little girl who seemed angry that her broom couldn't go as high or fast as the others. The girl kept trying to make it go up after a while of trying she fell off. Grimm starting walking again the he heard someone yell "You!" Grimm turned to see the girl looking at him "Do you want to play?" Grimm not wanting to get in trouble from his mom told the girl "I need to go get some things for my mom but after that I can."
 
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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Grimm Palatar: Elsewhere Child
« on: 07/06/2013 at 03:43 »
I have fixed the things you put as needing improvement or change.

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