Hi Ariadne! Welcome to H-S.net!
Your application looks great, but I was wondering if you could expand on your biography just a little. A lot of what you have there is good information, but it seems like it explains more about her personality than her history. Could you maybe explain a bit about what it was like for Ariadne to have to switch schools - and countries! - or what changes prompted her parents to switch her school? How did Ariadne feel about the changes? What's her family like? What's it like for her to not really get along with her siblings?
If you could re-post your application below, we'll be glad to take another look!
Thanks,
Izzy