Hi Liferia!
Welcome to the site!
There are a couple things in your application that we don't allow without prior admin approval. These things include having non-human ancestry (such as, but not limited to, vampires), having tattoos, having unusual eye and hair colours, and having special powers beyond what a normal witch or wizard would have (such as elemental and weather magic).
To get a better idea of the kind of abilities a student would have, you can read more about our magic rules
here.
To make a request for any or all of these special circumstances, please follow the special request instructions
here. Please keep in mind that not all requests are given approval.
In the meantime, you are welcome to wait for application approval until you've heard back about the special requests OR you can remove them from her bio for the time being and play as if they are not a part of her character until you've heard back. Either is fine, but the latter will allow you to get in and start threading right away.
In regards to you RP sample, please keep in mind that you would ideally want to keep the thread going for a few posts. When Liferia walks away she effectively shuts down the thread. If you could edit that just a little in a way that would give the other player something to respond to that would be great!
You can repost with edits here, and one of us will be happy to look over it again. Please let me know if you have any questions!
Thanks!
Alastair Grimm