Hogwarts School: A Harry Potter RPG

Dear Miss Woods,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 May 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.

Hi Lucas!

Your application is looking great! There are just a couple of edits I'll need you to make so we can get you accepted.

First, we're entering the 1950-1951 school term, so the birthday listed would currently make Lucas 30! You'll just want to change that to put him in the right age bracket.

While your RP is well-written, in a real thread with a real player having Hugh's rat bite Lucas and then picking the little guy up might be considered power playing of Hugh's pet (since, for all we know, he might be very well behaved in the biting department!). You could have him spot the rat and try to grab him, though, or something along those lines— as long as it leaves it open for Hugh's player to decide what his pet does and doesn't do.

Once you've made those changes, just post your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look!