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Krisaine Seraphine

    (02/12/2012 at 09:36)
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Name: Krisaine Starine Seraphine

Birthday: July 23

Hometown: London, England

Bloodline:  Halfblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Conjuring & Summoning

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): 1st year and 3rd year

Biography:
Krisaine is the only daughter of the Seraphine’s.  The youngest among the three. She lived half her life in France until her father died then move to England for a change. After the death of his father everything do changed.

Her mother became very distant from them. Still, she continues to work which give money to her and her brothers. Even though her mother changed her brothers are still the same. They were caring, loving and always cheerful. They were her sunshine. They help her go back to what she was before.

Behind the smiles she wear, a longing to a father’s arms was hiding. She do miss her dad. Her dad is a muggle, even so when he learned that Krisaine’s mom is a witch, he didn’t leave them. Her father love them so much. Every time the thought of her father will cross her mind a tear will fall from her eyes. Every time this happen she will go to her mother and they will hug for a minute and bring back the memories of her father.

No one knows about the past of Krisaine. She never open up to anyone. Well, except to her family. She feels very secretive. She never want any pity on her. She never dreamed to be pitied by anyone. She wants to be strong.


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House Request: Gryffindor


Personality: A very adventurous gal. She likes to take risks. She’s a happy-go-lucky, careless witch. She is always at troubles line. Mischief is her life. A trait she inherited from both of her parents. She might be adventurous and likely but she’s the clumsiest girl you’ll ever know.
She’s very secretive. You could always trust her with secrets. She kept her mouth shut when it comes to secrets. She have a lot of friends at home and school. She love everyone who became very close to her. She could be your best of friends but the worst enemy.

Appearance: A long brown hair and a bright blue eyes both inherited from her dad. Only her petite body came from her mom. She’s not tall nor small.

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Option 2:

“Hey!”

I jumped at the booming voice coming from the back. I turned but thank to the magic of clumsiness I tripped on my own foot.

“Bloody hell that hurts.” I mumbled. I slowly got up and massage my hurt butt. I looked at the girl who called up. The reason I embarrassed myself. It’s a good thing no one is around.

“What do you think about serving frog legs at lunch? Some say it’s a delicacy, but others think it’s plain gross.” It’s a slytherin girl. I think her name was Astrid from the school newspaper.

I think for some minute. Holding my chin. Aha!

“It would be nice to taste frog legs at lunch. A delicacy.” It could be my first time eating frog! Even if it really is gross, still I want to try. It could be nice seeing others face; looking at the food with a gross face.

She wrote it down. After that I walk towards potions class. I hate that subject. Slytherin subject. Augh. The never ending fight between Gryffindor and Slytherin. Well better hurry up or else I’ll spend my time outside the classroom.

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Elizabeth Birch-Hurst

    (02/12/2012 at 17:49)
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Hi Krisaine!

Welcome to the site. :)

Just a couple of things before we can get you approved. Right now your roleplay is written in the first person. All our roleplays here are done in third person past tense, (so 'she thought her name was Astrid from the school newspaper', rather than 'I think'.) Also, at the end, you are writing for Astrid's character when you mention that Astrid wrote down Krisaine's quote. We only write for our own characters, so it would be up to Astrid's 'writer' whether she wants to write down what Krisaine says in her next post.

Reply here with the changes to your roleplay when you're ready and one of us will look over it for you.

Thanks!

~Birch
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seeing that death, a necessary end,
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Krisaine Seraphine

    (04/12/2012 at 12:27)
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→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.
Name: Krisaine Starine Seraphine

Birthday: July 23

Hometown: London, England

Bloodline:  Halfblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Conjuring & Summoning

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): 1st year and 3rd year

Biography:
Krisaine is the only daughter of the Seraphine’s.  The youngest among the three. She lived half her life in France until her father died then move to England for a change. After the death of his father everything do changed.

Her mother became very distant from them. Still, she continues to work which give money to her and her brothers. Even though her mother changed her brothers are still the same. They were caring, loving and always cheerful. They were her sunshine. They help her go back to what she was before.

Behind the smiles she wear, a longing to a father’s arms was hiding. She do miss her dad. Her dad is a muggle, even so when he learned that Krisaine’s mom is a witch, he didn’t leave them. Her father love them so much. Every time the thought of her father will cross her mind a tear will fall from her eyes. Every time this happen she will go to her mother and they will hug for a minute and bring back the memories of her father.


→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Gryffindor

Personality: A very adventurous gal. She likes to take risks. She’s a happy-go-lucky, careless witch. She is always at troubles line. Mischief is her life. A trait she inherited from both of her parents. She might be adventurous and likely but she’s the clumsiest girl you’ll ever know.

Appearance: A long brown hair and a bright blue eyes both inherited from her dad. Only her petite body came from her mom. She’s not tall nor small.

→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
Please reply to one of the Sample Roleplays below.

Please reply to one of the Sample Roleplays below.

Option 2:

“Hey!”

Krisaine jumped at the booming voice coming from the back. She turned but thank to the magic of clumsiness  she tripped on her own foot.

“Bloody hell that hurts.” she mumbled. She slowly got up and massage her hurt butt. She looked at the girl who called up. The reason she embarrassed herself. It’s a good thing no one is around.

“What do you think about serving frog legs at lunch? Some say it’s a delicacy, but others think it’s plain gross.” It’s a slytherin girl. She thought her name was Astrid from the school newspaper.

She think for some minute. Holding her chin. Aha!

“It would be nice to taste frog legs at lunch. A delicacy.” It could be her first time eating frog! Even if it really is gross, still she wants to try. It could be nice seeing others face; looking at the food with a gross face.

After that she walked away towards potions class. She hate that subject as much as she hate slugs. If you’re asking why she hates slugs, well, she hates slow things.

Slytherin subject. Augh. The never ending fight between Gryffindor and Slytherin. Well better hurry up or else I’ll spend my time outside the classroom.


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Alastair Grimm

    (04/12/2012 at 23:52)
Hi Krisaine!

Thanks for making those changes! Your RP sample is looking good!

Just one thing - having Krisaine walk off to class after she finishes speaking to Astrid would end the RP. Mind changing that part so Astrid would have a chance to respond in the next post? Post your edited RP sample in this thread and we will take another look.

Thank You!
Alastair Grimm

Krisaine Seraphine

    (05/12/2012 at 13:23)
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→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.
Name: Krisaine Starine Seraphine

Birthday: July 23

Hometown: London, England

Bloodline:  Halfblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Conjuring & Summoning

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): 1st year and 3rd year

Biography:
Krisaine is the only daughter of the Seraphine’s.  The youngest among the three. She lived half her life in France until her father died then move to England for a change. After the death of his father everything do changed.

Her mother became very distant from them. Still, she continues to work which give money to her and her brothers. Even though her mother changed her brothers are still the same. They were caring, loving and always cheerful. They were her sunshine. They help her go back to what she was before.

Behind the smiles she wear, a longing to a father’s arms was hiding. She do miss her dad. Her dad is a muggle, even so when he learned that Krisaine’s mom is a witch, he didn’t leave them. Her father love them so much. Every time the thought of her father will cross her mind a tear will fall from her eyes. Every time this happen she will go to her mother and they will hug for a minute and bring back the memories of her father.


→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Gryffindor

Personality: A very adventurous gal. She likes to take risks. She’s a happy-go-lucky, careless witch. She is always at troubles line. Mischief is her life. A trait she inherited from both of her parents. She might be adventurous and likely but she’s the clumsiest girl you’ll ever know. She has a bad memory too. A forgetful one.

Appearance: A long brown hair and a bright blue eyes both inherited from her dad. Only her petite body came from her mom. She’s not tall nor small.

→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
Please reply to one of the Sample Roleplays below.

“Hey!”

Krisaine jumped at the booming voice coming from the back. She turned but thank to the magic of clumsiness  she tripped on her own foot.

“Bloody hell that hurts.” she mumbled. She slowly got up and massage her hurt butt. She looked at the girl who called up. The reason she embarrassed herself. It’s a good thing no one is around.

“What do you think about serving frog legs at lunch? Some say it’s a delicacy, but others think it’s plain gross.” It’s a slytherin girl. She thought her name was Astrid from the school newspaper.

She think for some minute. Holding her chin. Aha!

“It would be nice to taste frog legs at lunch. A delicacy.” It could be her first time eating frog! Even if it really is gross, still she wants to try. It could be nice seeing others face; looking at the food with a gross face.

After that she walked away towards potions class. She hate that subject as much as she hate slugs. If you’re asking why she hates slugs, well, she hates slow things.

She stop at mid-walk remembering it’s their free time. Augh. Such a stupid memory!

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How did you find us?: through Wikipedia.



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    (05/12/2012 at 13:57)
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Miss Seraphine,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 January 2013. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.

Sincerely,


Slytherin House Head
and if I'm flying solo, at least I'm flying free
to those who ground me, take a message back from me
tell them how I am defying gravity

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