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Archived Applications / Re: Jojolr23's Aplication Format
« on: 11/12/2011 at 10:52 »
Thank you for your application to Hogwarts. There are a few things we need you to do before we can accept you:
- Since you are requesting first year, your biography needs to be at least 100 words long, so you will need to expand it. In particular, we would like to know more about the character - where is he from, what sort of things does he like doing, does he know any other purebloods, and so on?
- Your RP response is also rather short, and doesn't tell us much about what the character was doing when he bumped into James, or what he is thinking about the situation. You can take a look through these successful applications to see what sort of thing we're looking for here.
- Note that, as per the site rules, you are not allowed to have "Potter" as part of your name, so you will need to change that, and then apply for membership of the board with your new character name.