We are currently accepting new applications for Elsewhere!

Author Topic: Edward Forest application  (Read 240 times)

Edward Forest

    (04/12/2019 at 13:21)
    • View Profile
Name: Edward Forest

Birthday: September 27 1958

Hometown: London

Bloodline:
 Pureblood

Magical Strength (pick one):
 Charms

Magical Weakness (pick one):
 Transfiguration

Year 0-1:

Biography:
Edward Forest was Born to Kate and Matthew Forest on the 27 of September 1958. however when he was 5 a fire took his home and parents and he was found wandering the streets. He was found by 3 kind hags that gave him a home and raised him to be a kind person.

 the eldest Hag Florina was the strictist.but this was because she expected a lot from him.

Polly was the middle. she was a kind plump hag who was known foe her delicious  treats

and then you had the youngest Bellavick and though she was the youngest she was definitely the wisest.

however other kids where mean. calling him hag boy and teasing his shyness. he longs for the day he's letter arrives

House Request:Gryffindor or Slytherin

Edward Forest

Edward Forest

    (04/12/2019 at 13:25)
    • View Profile

 

Name: Edward Forest

Birthday: September 27 1947

Hometown: London

Bloodline:
 Pureblood

Magical Strength (pick one):
 Charms

Magical Weakness (pick one):
 Transfiguration

Year 0-1:

Biography:
Edward Forest was Born to Kate and Matthew Forest on the 27 of September 1958. however when he was 5 a fire took his home and parents and he was found wandering the streets. He was found by 3 kind hags that gave him a home and raised him to be a kind person.

 the eldest Hag Florina was the strictist.but this was because she expected a lot from him.

Polly was the middle. she was a kind plump hag who was known foe her delicious  treats

and then you had the youngest Bellavick and though she was the youngest she was definitely the wisest.

however other kids where mean. calling him hag boy and teasing his shyness. he longs for the day he's letter arrives

House Request:Gryffindor or Slytherin
Edward Forest

* Calypso Ross

    (04/12/2019 at 14:06)
  • ***
  • Head of the Auror Office
  • C32D25T24S23
  • [1946] Site-Wide Superlative Winner! ['45-'46] Duelling Finalist ['45-'46] Queen of the Hospital Wing ['44-'45] Quidditch Champions ['44-'45] Duelling Finalist [1945] Superlative Winner [Winner!] HSNet 30-Day Challenge Biggest Teacher's Pet ['43-'44] Duelling Finalist ['42-'43] Queen of the Hospital Wing
    • View Profile
Hi Edward, and welcome to the site!

Your application is coming along nicely, but it looks like you're missing some sections, most importantly the Roleplay Sample section.

If you go back to the Hogwarts Student Application Template here, and scroll down towards the bottom half of the post, you will see a 'code' section. If you click the 'select' button next to this, and then do ctrl/cmd c to copy, you can paste it (using ctrl/cmd v) into a new reply to this topic. This should give you the whole template to fill out.

A couple of other things I've noticed in your application so far:
1. If you want Edward to be a first year this coming term, his birthday would be 27 September 1946.
2. When we ask for your year, you need to pick two years. If you're hoping for Edward to be a first year, you should put 'First (preferred)' and then your second choice of year after that. Most people who are applying for first year put second year as their second choice, e.g. 'First (preferred), second'.

Please could you copy/paste the full template and fill it out completely? Please could you also edit the birthday and the year for Edward, as I mentioned above. Once you've made the required changes, please repost your entire revised application in a new reply to this topic, and we'll be more than happy to take another look.

If you have any questions about this or need some more help, please feel free to PM me. Thanks!

G
Daring, Determination, Drive

Edward Forest

    (05/12/2019 at 01:23)
    • View Profile
Name: Edward Forest

Birthday: September 27 1947

Hometown: London

Bloodline:
 Pureblood

Magical Strength (pick one):
 Charms

Magical Weakness (pick one):
 Transfiguration

Year :1 (preferred) 2

Biography:
Edward Forest was Born to Kate and Matthew Forest on the 27 of September 1958. however when he was 5 a fire took his home and parents and he was found wandering the streets. He was found by 3 kind hags that gave him a home and raised him to be a kind person.

 the eldest Hag Florina was the strictist.but this was because she expected a lot from him.

Polly was the middle. she was a kind plump hag who was known foe her delicious  treats

and then you had the youngest Bellavick and though she was the youngest she was definitely the wisest.

however other kids where mean. calling him hag boy and teasing his shyness. he longs for the day he's letter arrives

House Request:Gryffindor or Slytherin
Edward Forest

* Calypso Ross

    (07/12/2019 at 20:56)
  • ***
  • Head of the Auror Office
  • C32D25T24S23
  • [1946] Site-Wide Superlative Winner! ['45-'46] Duelling Finalist ['45-'46] Queen of the Hospital Wing ['44-'45] Quidditch Champions ['44-'45] Duelling Finalist [1945] Superlative Winner [Winner!] HSNet 30-Day Challenge Biggest Teacher's Pet ['43-'44] Duelling Finalist ['42-'43] Queen of the Hospital Wing
    • View Profile
Hi again, Edward!

It looks like you were having some trouble with posting the full application, so I've posted the full application template below for you, and filled out all the things you already wrote in your original application. The parts in red are the parts that you still need to complete.

Could you copy all of the application I've posted below, paste it into a new reply (not a new topic), and then fill out the red sections too? You still need to complete:
- Personality Section. If you're not sure what to put here, try and think of some adjectives which describe Edward. This helps us to choose which house Edward should be in.
- Appearance. What does Edward look like? This part is optional, so you don't have to fill this out.
- Sample Roleplay. There are two options, so you can pick which one you would like to respond to and then write a reply to it as Edward. If you're not sure what we're looking for here, you can have a look at our sample applications.
- How did you find us? Most people find us on Google or TopSites, and we're interested to know how you found out site!

Once you have completed those extra sections, please post your complete application in a new reply to this topic, so that we can take another look. If you have any questions or need any help filling out the rest of your application, please let me or another administrator know, and we'll be happy to help. Thanks!




→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.

Name: Edward Forest

Birthday: September 27 1946

Hometown: London

Bloodline: Pureblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Charms

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): 1 (preferred), 2

Biography:
Edward Forest was Born to Kate and Matthew Forest on the 27 of September 1958. however when he was 5 a fire took his home and parents and he was found wandering the streets. He was found by 3 kind hags that gave him a home and raised him to be a kind person.

 the eldest Hag Florina was the strictist.but this was because she expected a lot from him.

Polly was the middle. she was a kind plump hag who was known foe her delicious  treats

and then you had the youngest Bellavick and though she was the youngest she was definitely the wisest.

however other kids where mean. calling him hag boy and teasing his shyness. he longs for the day he's letter arrives

→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Gryffindor or Slytherin

Personality:
Tell us a bit about your character’s personality (likes, dislikes, fears, etc.) What are they like on a good day versus a bad one? Is your character particularly cheerful? Do they hate sunlight?

Appearance:
Briefly describe your character's appearance (hair color, build, stature, etc.) What effect does it have on their personality? For example, does the shy Ravenclaw girl secretly dye her hair black because she hates her natural blonde? Does the curly-haired Gryffindor use charms to hide his freckles?


→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
You come across one of these posts on the site. Please select one & reply as your character. Remember, you can only roleplay your own character's actions, not Evangeline's or Hugh's.


Option I:

The dungeons. A place eleven-year-old Evangeline had not yet travelled since her arrival at Hogwarts.

A place she really was just fine with not knowing; but it was too late. The dare had been accepted, even if it had been done in fear of being kicked out of Gryffindor, like the older girls had said she would because Gryffindors were supposed to be brave.

The air changed instantly when she hit the main corridor of the dungeons. The dampness was almost too much for her and she instinctively took a deep breath to avoid the sensation of being suffocated. There was also a sour burning smell which Evangeline assumed was from many, many Potions lessons.

Further and further she walked, her steps so slow and gentle they made no noise against the stone walls and floor. The feeling that she wasn't alone crept up her spine and raised the tiny hair on the back of her neck. Shivering, Evangeline wrapped her arms around herself. Suddenly, she missed the warmth and comfort of the Gryffindor common room. The fire was always going and it made her feel at ease.

Why had she let those girls talk her into this? She was only eleven, she didn't have to be brave. Surely the Headmistress would not kick her out of Hogwarts for not being brave.

If only she had these thoughts while being dared to search for the ghost of one Emma Birch, whom supposedly haunted the dungeons. It was not, Evangeline had learned, the place where the sixteen-year-old girl's life had ended but as she had been from the house with a snake as its mascot, it was the place her spirit had returned to. That common room was down here somewhere, she'd been told.

Something - the small blonde girl wasn't quite sure what - but something made her stop in her tracks suddenly. There was a low, dull thumping noise. Or maybe that was her heart beating so loudly she thought it was coming from outside her body.

"H-h-hello?" Her voice was barely above a whisper.

Remembering that she was supposed to be brave, Evangeline tried again.

"Hello! Is Emma Birch here?"

The sound of her own words bouncing back at her off the walls made her jump.



Option 2:

That rat of his was in for it now.

The gray little rascal had disappeared from his clutches at breakfast. Again.

Before Hugh even knew what was happening, Merlin had shot across the floor, somehow managing to avoid all the feet walking across the hall and had escaped through the open doors.

Which meant that Hugh was now stomping through rows of flowers and other various flora, searching for the small creature. It was like the rat knew Hugh was allergic to most flowers. Merlin always chose to run to the gardens whenever he got away from Hugh. It was as if the rat did not want to have him for an owner.

Hugh had named his pet Merlin because he had hoped the powerful name would give the rat more incentive to be more than a rat. Not that he expected Merlin to change into a wizard or anything, but rats were just so...useless, for the most part. With a name like Merlin, Hugh thought it might give the rat purpose.

The only purpose Merlin seemed to have was getting away from Hugh as often as possible.

As the fifth year trudged into the second row of flowers, not taking much care to avoid trampling the first row, he felt the first sneeze building up pressure in his nose and behind his eyes.

"You blasted rat! Where are you?"

He pulled apart a section of bright red flowers; he didn't know what they were called because he despised flowers, and ducked his head low to peer into the depths of the flowerbed. It was moving closer in proximity to the flowers that finally did it. Hugh took in three great breaths and then let out an almighty sneeze. It was strong enough to disturb some of the dirt on the ground before him.

Groaning, he stood up again and wiped his nose on his sleeve. It was as he was turning his head, his nose running up and down his arm, that movement in his peripheral vision caught his attention. Normally one who preferred to put his best face forward, Hugh was a bit embarrassed to be caught wiping his runny nose on his robes.

Nevertheless, Hugh put on his best haughty voice. albeit a bit thickly with his plugged nose and said, "Can I help you with something? It is not polite to stare."

Roleplay Response:
Write your roleplay response here.


→ ABOUT YOU.

Please list any characters you have  on the site (current and previous): None

How did you find us?:
look out! look out!
'CAUSE EACH TIME I FALL
I'LL BE CRASHING DOWN
RIGHT THROUGH YOUR ARMS

Tags: