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Lilith Roberts

    (01/06/2019 at 02:01)
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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Emma Jones

Gender: Female

Age: 11

Bloodline: Halfblood

Parents/Guardians (Are they currently played characters?): 
No

Residence:
Godrics Hollow

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the daycare)?
No

Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
No

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:
n/a

Biography: (100 words minimum.)
Emma was a very inquisitive child by nature, and was the one who always asked "why?" She started reading simple words by the age of four, and although she knew how to walk, preferred to stay still. Her parents were Muggle-lovers by nature and successful aurors. She also helped take care of her little cousin in whatever ways she could. She spent a lot of time with her dad, who would often color with her, and taught her how to sound out more complex words. Both parents tried to get Emma to be more active, but they had little luck for a long time. They finally almost gave in after an incident that left Emma with a scar on her right knee, and a broken bike. Her cousin Brittney had been a year old, and Emma was now four. The crash itself wasn't as bad as the landing. She had managed to tip the bike over, and had landed on a razor sharp shard of glass. The bike was fine until it was run over by the neighbor. It wasn't until a close family friend suggested swimming that they regained hope for sports. Emma instantly loved the water, and was swimming well in what seemed like no time. Even young Brittney enjoyed playing in her floaties with her mom.At the age of six, Emma met some of the other children on the block. She had seen them before, but it was at a summer block party that she really met everyone. She had sat in the corner for a majority of the party, reading her book and drinking lemonade, until another young girl had walked up. She had introduced herself as Katie, and started talking. At first Emma was nervous. It was her first time meeting someone her age, and she wasn't very good at introductions. Finally the girl had paused to ask Emma a little about herself. After Emma finished, the two talked about what they liked to do, and simple things that children usually talk about.

Roleplay:
Reply as your character to the following:

Godric Park.

Overhead, the sky was a crisp blue, for once clear of the ever-pervasive spongy clouds and rain. The sun was a lemony-yellow presence, high in the Eastern sky, and in front of it zipped three broomsticks in a straight line, or something very like one. One... two..... three... the boys passed, their shouts of excitement echoing as they chased the snitch, a tiny shimmer reflecting the sunlight.

Far below was another, much smaller broomstick.

It trugged along the ground, hugging close to it like a sluggish choo choo train and occasionally shuttering in protest. This was because said stick was currently being occupied by a very small girl who was tugging upward on the front of it with all her might, trying to coax it into doing what it had been expressly designed NOT to do.

"John, I said wait up!" The tiny girl squealed, giving the broomstick another tug.

Begrudgingly, it drifted upward a foot, and then sank, depositing the troublesome girl safely on the ground. Janey Hurst was not pleased. In a huff, she hopped off the toy safety broom, grabbing it firmly and thrusting it handle first into the turf.

Her brother was such a beast. He NEVER let her play! She folded her arms, seething blue eyes fixing on another figure nearby.  "You!" She barked, much more sharply than she meant to.

"...Do you want to play?"

Roleplay Response:
How Emma loved going to the park.

Why did the weather have to be so bleak?  And then she saw the brooms.  Why did they have to do this in pain sight of Muggles?

Then there was a tinier broomstick.  With no one on it?  How awkward!

What was going on?  She ran and tried to stop the broom.

The little girl was clearly in a hurry.  But for what?

And then she was safe.  PHEW.  Emma thought she would walk away.  Then she looked at her watch.  BLIMEY.  It's past curfew.

He was mean alright.  And then she watched from a distance while the little girl asked him to play.  WOW.


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Merryl Midthunder

    (13/06/2019 at 17:19)
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Hi Emma! Your application is coming along nicely, however, there are some things which will need to be sorted out before we can accept your application.

First, your username Emma Swan-Jones is pulled directly from Once Upon a Time. As per our character creation guidelines:
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•  Please do not take names or characters directly from other books, series or movies and apply as them here. Also do not apply as a celebrity or real person. We are a roleplaying site interested in your original characters, not reinterpretations of pre-existing and copyrighted ones.
Even though the surname Swan isn't mentioned in your biography, on this site, usernames reflect each character's name. Therefore, you will need to post a helpdesk ticket requesting to change your username.

Secondly, I'm unsure whether your rp sample responds to the provided prompt, as it directly contradicts several aspects laid out within the prompt, such as Janey riding the broom in Godric Park -- a place in Hogsmeade, a wizarding village with no muggles around. Additionally, Emma doesn't interact with Janey at all. While this is a sample and Janey is not a played character on this site, the goal of the rp sample section in our application aims to give us an idea of how you would respond to a real thread once you've been accepted. Therefore, you should respond to the prompt with interactions that would allow Janey's hypothetical player to respond back, interacting with Emma and not an NPC.

Once you've changed your username and made the required changes to your rp sample, please repost your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to give it another look. Please feel free to pm me or any other administrator if you have any questions!

Lilith Roberts

    (13/06/2019 at 19:23)
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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Lilith Roberts

Gender: Female

Age: 11

Bloodline: Halfblood

Parents/Guardians (Are they currently played characters?): 
No

Residence:
Godrics Hollow

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the daycare)?
No

Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
No

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:
n/a

Biography: (100 words minimum.)
Lilith was a very inquisitive child by nature, and was the one who always asked "why?" She started reading simple words by the age of four, and although she knew how to walk, preferred to stay still. Her parents were Muggle-lovers by nature and successful aurors. She also helped take care of her little cousin in whatever ways she could. She spent a lot of time with her dad, who would often color with her, and taught her how to sound out more complex words. Both parents tried to get Lilith to be more active, but they had little luck for a long time. They finally almost gave in after an incident that left Lilith with a scar on her right knee, and a broken bike. Her cousin Brittney had been a year old, and Lilith was now four. The crash itself wasn't as bad as the landing. She had managed to tip the bike over, and had landed on a razor sharp shard of glass. The bike was fine until it was run over by the neighbor. It wasn't until a close family friend suggested swimming that they regained hope for sports. Lilith instantly loved the water, and was swimming well in what seemed like no time. Even young Brittney enjoyed playing in her floaties with her mom.At the age of six, Lilith met some of the other children on the block. She had seen them before, but it was at a summer block party that she really met everyone. She had sat in the corner for a majority of the party, reading her book and drinking lemonade, until another young girl had walked up. She had introduced herself as Katie, and started talking. At first Lilith was nervous. It was her first time meeting someone her age, and she wasn't very good at introductions. Finally the girl had paused to ask Lilith a little about herself. After Lilith finished, the two talked about what they liked to do, and simple things that children usually talk about.

Roleplay:
Reply as your character to the following:

Godric Park.

Overhead, the sky was a crisp blue, for once clear of the ever-pervasive spongy clouds and rain. The sun was a lemony-yellow presence, high in the Eastern sky, and in front of it zipped three broomsticks in a straight line, or something very like one. One... two..... three... the boys passed, their shouts of excitement echoing as they chased the snitch, a tiny shimmer reflecting the sunlight.

Far below was another, much smaller broomstick.

It trugged along the ground, hugging close to it like a sluggish choo choo train and occasionally shuttering in protest. This was because said stick was currently being occupied by a very small girl who was tugging upward on the front of it with all her might, trying to coax it into doing what it had been expressly designed NOT to do.

"John, I said wait up!" The tiny girl squealed, giving the broomstick another tug.

Begrudgingly, it drifted upward a foot, and then sank, depositing the troublesome girl safely on the ground. Janey Hurst was not pleased. In a huff, she hopped off the toy safety broom, grabbing it firmly and thrusting it handle first into the turf.

Her brother was such a beast. He NEVER let her play! She folded her arms, seething blue eyes fixing on another figure nearby.  "You!" She barked, much more sharply than she meant to.

"...Do you want to play?"

Roleplay Response:
The park.  It was a beautiful day for a stroll.  Then she saw something.  Quidditch?  Was that what it was?  Lilith watched the people on broomsticks in awe.  The girl was being so aggressive with her broom!  Like the broom was a toy!  Then off she went.  What was the word she was looking for?  Gentle.  And then she threw it.  Hard.  Why was Janey so harsh?  Especially towards her little brother.  Like he did nothing wrong.  Lilith decided to go home.  It was safest.  Full of wizards in Godric Park, Hogsmeade.  Near Hogwarts even.

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