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Arnett Chevalier

    (29/08/2014 at 14:49)
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Application for Hogwarts School




→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.
Name: Arnett Chevalier

Birthday: December 28, 2003

Hometown: London, England

Bloodline: Half-blood on her mothers side.

Magical Strength (pick one): Charms

Magical Weakness (pick one): Divination

Year (pick two): 1st Year

Biography: Arnett was born in the French town of Amiens, while her parents were on vacation.  They returned to their home in London, and were a happy family. When Arnett was 6, her parents gave her to an orphanage because they were running low on money and were worried that they couldn't support her.  Her mother wouldn't use her worlds money, as she hadn't told her husband the truth about her. The little girl felt abandoned and lonely, but as she was at the orphanage longer, she began to make friends with the other children.  She hasn't been adopted yet, but she hopes to be adopted soon.

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Please reply to one of the Sample Roleplays below.

I chose Option 2:

     The girl walked along the halls, her long brown hair brushing against her lower arms.  She paused, and took a good chunk of it in her hands, braiding it as she continued along.  She was in a very echoey corridor, and suddenly she could hear hurried footsteps on the stone.  A girls voice could be heard from far away, until suddenly, it was right behind her.  “What do you think about serving frog legs at lunch? Some say it’s a delicacy, but others think it’s plain gross.”

     Arnett turned around in surprise, eyes wide.  She looked at the girl, who was panting.  "Um... I..."  She stopped talking and took a breath because of the shock.  "Well, I haven't really ate them because I think they are horrid.  So I suppose I can say that it's gross."  The green eyed girl said more confidently.  Pushing her hair behind her ear, she smiled.  "Anything else?"


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Arnett Chevalier

    (29/08/2014 at 14:52)
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(Sorry, the year is off.  She was born in 1932)

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    (30/08/2014 at 02:02)
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Hi Arnett!

Your application looks great. While your biography meets the word count, I'd like to see a little bit more about Arnett. What was her life like before the orphanage? What were her parents like? What kind of person is Arentt? Nice? Mean? Does she have any hobbies or talents?

The more information you give us about her and her life before Hogwarts, the better we'll be able to sort you.

(Also, to be a first year she should be born in 1930.)

You don't need to repost the entire application. If you could post your revised biography below, we'll be happy to take another look.

Thanks!
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Arnett Chevalier

    (31/08/2014 at 15:08)
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Arnett Chevalier

    (31/08/2014 at 15:17)
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Biography: Arnett was born in the French town of Amiens, while her parents were on vacation.  They returned to their home in London, and were a happy family. Her father was a small business owner! and their house was above the small candy shop.  He would always hand out free samples to children, and like her mother, always smiled.  Her mother on the other hand, was a seamstress, who took jobs when people came to visit.  There weren't many though.  Soon, larger stores left her mother without a job, and her fathers store began to have less customers. When Arnett was 6, her parents gave her to an orphanage because they were running low on money and were worried that they couldn't support her.  Her mother wouldn't use her worlds money, as she hadn't told her husband the truth about her. The little girl felt abandoned and lonely, but as she was at the orphanage longer, she began to make friends with the other children.  Drawing pictures and reading would get her through most of the tougher days, like the anniversary of when she was given up, or her birthday.  She would also sing, a rarity that would cause the younger children to gather outside her door to hear.  She hasn't been adopted yet, but she hopes to be adopted soon.

Personality: She is a courageous yet shy girl, who doesn't love to be surprised.  If this happens, she tends to stutter.

(Here you go!)

Isabelle Valentine

    (31/08/2014 at 15:52)
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Miss Chavalier,

Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 September, 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School.


Regards,
Isabelle Valentine,
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