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Elena Fortina

    (25/04/2014 at 23:49)
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Character Name:[Elena Fortina]

Gender:[Female]

Age:[6]

Bloodline:[Muggleborn]

Parents/Guardians (Are they currently played characters?):[No] 
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No Parents as of now.

Residence:[Streets,Park until found]
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Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the daycare)?[Yes]
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Raised in the Muggleworld with muggle parents.

Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason? [None]
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She does not know anyone or my other character.

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Lynette Crossings:Hogwarts Student

Biography: (100 words minimum.)[At only age six Elena found her life in the 70’s soon back to WWII with her parents missing and a full war in action. Using all she had she pressed on looking for her parents. Her wizarding abilities is what allowed her to live threw the days as she made her way to London in hopes her parents were there. But instead found a secret wall that led her into a strange new world she had never seen. Now in the wizarding world she lives on the streets looking around this new world unable to go back. She is very bold,rash with street smarts. Elena has reddish brown hair and deep brown eyes wearing a army coat from the Italian military she “borrowed” from a empty base camp on her travels.]
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Godric Park.

Overhead, the sky was a crisp blue, for once clear of the ever-pervasive spongy clouds and rain. The sun was a lemony-yellow presence, high in the Eastern sky, and in front of it zipped three broomsticks in a straight line, or something very like one. One... two..... three... the boys passed, their shouts of excitement echoing as they chased the snitch, a tiny shimmer reflecting the sunlight.

Far below was another, much smaller broomstick.

It trugged along the ground, hugging close to it like a sluggish choo choo train and occasionally shuttering in protest. This was because said stick was currently being occupied by a very small girl who was tugging upward on the front of it with all her might, trying to coax it into doing what it had been expressly designed NOT to do.

"John, I said wait up!" The tiny girl squealed, giving the broomstick another tug.

Begrudgingly, it drifted upward a foot, and then sank, depositing the troublesome girl safely on the ground. Janey Hurst was not pleased. In a huff, she hopped off the toy safety broom, grabbing it firmly and thrusting it handle first into the turf.

Her brother was such a beast. He NEVER let her play! She folded her arms, seething blue eyes fixing on another figure nearby.  "You!" She barked, much more sharply than she meant to.

"...Do you want to play?"

Roleplay Response:
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Elena was unsure how to answer as far as she knew she was a regular girl in some strange world. But she did want to play and agreed. Elena soon went to play with her and found herself smiling for the first time in weeks. Elena hoped she and Jancy would become best friends. Maybe this strange world Elena found wasn’t so bad after all. She felt bad Jancy had such a hard time with her brother and his friends. But told Jancy for now on if she wanted she would be her sister by friendship and smiled at Jancy not wanting the day to ever end.

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« Last Edit: 26/04/2014 at 00:00 by Aubrey Rousseau »

* B. Llewellyn Thatcher

    (27/04/2014 at 02:48)
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Elena,

Just a few things of note from your application that will need to be reworked.

Firstly, you mention that Elena is currently age six, but in her biography you mention that at age six she experienced what we refer to as the Time Warp. While it is important that you mention it as Elena is a Muggleborn, by our current board time of 1941, the Time Warp occurred five and a half years ago which would make Elena about one at the time and unlikely to remember her parents or wander the streets. In that case, she mostly likely would have been picked up by someone from an orphanage and either raised there or been sent to the orphanage at St. Mungo's.

Also, at such a young age - while we are aware that magic does make it's appearance in tough situations - it's unlikely that magical ability could carry her for an extended amount of time as she made her way to Wizarding London.

If you could just take a good look your bio and present a time frame or storyline that makes a bit more sense, we will be glad to take another look at your application!

- B.

Elena Fortina

    (27/04/2014 at 06:45)
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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name:[Elena Fortina]

Gender:[Female]

Age:[6]

Bloodline:[Muggleborn]

Parents/Guardians (Are they currently played characters?):[No] 
No Parents as of now.

Residence:[Streets,Park until found]
Type your response here - where does your character live?

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the daycare)?[Yes]
Type your response here.
Raised in the Muggleworld.

Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason? [None]
Type your response here.
She does not know anyone or my other character.

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:[yes]
Type your response here.
Lynette Crossings:Hogwarts Student

Biography: (100 words minimum.)[When Elena’s parents vanished when she was only one being the last of Fortina Linage known to many muggles as a rich and powerful family she was soon under the care of another well known Italian family. Known as the Lucinos during her life in the muggleworld during World War Two the Ministry could not agree on how to get to the young witch. Until finally in 1941 in February she took a trip with her foster family to germany. Upon arrival a british agent undercover not just for England but for the Wizarding World as well easily recognizes six year old Elena near the train station. Starting a small fire in the trash people run to get away or put the fire out. In the massive crowd Elena was separated from her foster parents and picked up by the agent who took her with him and hid them inside a vacant train compartment. Elena was stunned and scared but the agent won her trust when he talked to her more and letting her decide when she wanted to talk or move closer. He tells her that she must get to London for her safety. At first she is unsure about leaving the Lucinos but he told her it would be want her parents would want. Hearing this Elena agreed but a unplanned train stop in a town not far from the border out of germany. Unable to hid himself he hides Elena as the police take Elena’s wizard alley. She wanted to go after him but remembered what he said and stayed hidden getting off once she was able to get to London switching trains three times. Arriving all alone in London; Elena was soon quite scared and ran down a alley. Not looking where she was going she slipped on a puddle and into one of the portals to the wizarding world. Now scared out of her mind Elena ran past everyone not stopping for a moment eventually she couldn’t keep going and hid in a small area behind a mound of empty boxes by a shop in Diagon Alley and was soon fast asleep. Unknown to her those in charge of her safety had opened the portal. Not to scare her more then she already was they secertly followed her until she fell asleep. One of wizards picked her up and first took her to the medical bay at St.Mungo's just incase. Elena had no idea how much life would soon change for her.


Roleplay:
Reply as your character to the following:

Godric Park.

Overhead, the sky was a crisp blue, for once clear of the ever-pervasive spongy clouds and rain. The sun was a lemony-yellow presence, high in the Eastern sky, and in front of it zipped three broomsticks in a straight line, or something very like one. One... two..... three... the boys passed, their shouts of excitement echoing as they chased the snitch, a tiny shimmer reflecting the sunlight.

Far below was another, much smaller broomstick.

It trugged along the ground, hugging close to it like a sluggish choo choo train and occasionally shuttering in protest. This was because said stick was currently being occupied by a very small girl who was tugging upward on the front of it with all her might, trying to coax it into doing what it had been expressly designed NOT to do.

"John, I said wait up!" The tiny girl squealed, giving the broomstick another tug.

Begrudgingly, it drifted upward a foot, and then sank, depositing the troublesome girl safely on the ground. Janey Hurst was not pleased. In a huff, she hopped off the toy safety broom, grabbing it firmly and thrusting it handle first into the turf.

Her brother was such a beast. He NEVER let her play! She folded her arms, seething blue eyes fixing on another figure nearby.  "You!" She barked, much more sharply than she meant to.

"...Do you want to play?"

Roleplay Response:
Type your response here.
Elena was unsure how to answer as far as she knew she was a regular girl in some strange world. But she did want to play and agreed. Elena soon went to play with her and found herself smiling for the first time in weeks. Elena hoped she and Jancy would become best friends. Maybe this strange world Elena found wasn’t so bad after all. She felt bad Jancy had such a hard time with her brother and his friends. But told Jancy for now on if she wanted she would be her sister by friendship and smiled at Jancy not wanting the day to ever end.

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« Last Edit: 27/04/2014 at 22:50 by Elena Fortina »

Elena Fortina

    (27/04/2014 at 23:16)
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CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name:[Elena Fortina]

Gender:[Female]

Age:[6]

Bloodline:[Muggleborn]

Parents/Guardians (Are they currently played characters?):[No] 
No Parents as of now.

Residence:[Streets,Park until found]
Type your response here - where does your character live?

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the daycare)?[Yes]
Type your response here.
Raised in the Muggleworld.

Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason? [None]
Type your response here.
She does not know anyone or my other character.

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:[yes]
Type your response here.
Lynette Crossings:Hogwarts Student

Biography: (100 words minimum.)[When Elena’s parents vanished when she was only one being the last of Fortina Linage known to many muggles as a rich and powerful family she was soon under the care of another well known Italian family. Known as the Lucinos during her life in the muggleworld during World War Two the Ministry could not agree on how to get to the young witch. Until finally in 1941 in February she took a trip with her foster family to Germany. Upon arrival a british agent undercover not just for England but for the Wizarding World as well easily recognizes six year old Elena near the train station. Starting a small fire in the trash people run to get away or put the fire out. In the massive crowd Elena was separated from her foster parents and picked up by the agent who took her with him and hid them inside a vacant train compartment. Elena was stunned and scared but the agent won her trust when he talked to her more and letting her decide when she wanted to talk or move closer. He tells her that she must get to London for her safety. At first she is unsure about leaving the Lucinos but he told her it would be want her parents would want. Hearing this Elena agreed but an unplanned train stop in a town not far from the border out of Germany. Unable to hide himself he hid Elena as the police take Elena’s wizard alley. She wanted to go after him but remembered what he said and stayed hidden getting off once she was able to get to London switching trains three times. Arriving all alone in London; Elena was soon quite scared and ran down an alley. She hid behind some boxes and fell asleep once asleep those from the ministry who had been keeping an eye on her came out a wizard picking her up and the small group left with Elena back to the Wizarding World. The one wizard insisted Elena get checked out for injuries first and was taken to St.Mungo's for examination. The young little witch had no idea how her life was about to change forever as she slept.

Roleplay:
Reply as your character to the following:

Godric Park.

Overhead, the sky was a crisp blue, for once clear of the ever-pervasive spongy clouds and rain. The sun was a lemony-yellow presence, high in the Eastern sky, and in front of it zipped three broomsticks in a straight line, or something very like one. One... two..... three... the boys passed, their shouts of excitement echoing as they chased the snitch, a tiny shimmer reflecting the sunlight.

Far below was another, much smaller broomstick.

It trugged along the ground, hugging close to it like a sluggish choo choo train and occasionally shuttering in protest. This was because said stick was currently being occupied by a very small girl who was tugging upward on the front of it with all her might, trying to coax it into doing what it had been expressly designed NOT to do.

"John, I said wait up!" The tiny girl squealed, giving the broomstick another tug.

Begrudgingly, it drifted upward a foot, and then sank, depositing the troublesome girl safely on the ground. Janey Hurst was not pleased. In a huff, she hopped off the toy safety broom, grabbing it firmly and thrusting it handle first into the turf.

Her brother was such a beast. He NEVER let her play! She folded her arms, seething blue eyes fixing on another figure nearby.  "You!" She barked, much more sharply than she meant to.

"...Do you want to play?"

Roleplay Response:
Type your response here.
Elena was unsure how to answer as far as she knew she was a regular girl in some strange world. But she did want to play and agreed. Elena soon went to play with her and found herself smiling for the first time in weeks. Elena hoped she and Jancy would become best friends. Maybe this strange world Elena found wasn’t so bad after all. She felt bad Jancy had such a hard time with her brother and his friends. But told Jancy for now on if she wanted she would be her sister by friendship and smiled at Jancy not wanting the day to ever end.

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* Aubrey Kedding

    (28/04/2014 at 00:03)
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