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Archived Applications / Re: Taylor Night
« on: 07/12/2011 at 12:54 »

Miss Night,

Congratulations! We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardy. Term begins on 1st January and you will receive further details closer to the time. In the meantime, please join us in the Summer or Elsewhere board.

Welcome to Hogwarts.



Regards,


Timothy Vartan
Gryffindor HoH

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: I'm an idiot
« on: 07/12/2011 at 07:26 »
Hi cinnamontop,

Just create a new account with your character's name and I will delete this one for you. Thanks!

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Archived Applications / Re: Melinda Dawn Westshire
« on: 04/12/2011 at 22:37 »
Hi Melinda,

You're almost there, just a few thoughts regarding your current application:

1. It sounds like you are implying that Michael received an assignment from Hogwarts Headmaster to find (or kill) something in the Forbidden Forest. While this is a plausible idea, you need to talk to our headmaster (Professor Tibble) about it before. I understand that it maybe too tedious to plot in details with a current site member for your first application, so I'd recommend using an NPC rather than the headmaster. If Michael was working for the Ministry, perhaps he could be instructed to tend to the creature by the Magical Creature department to do so? This is just a suggestion, you are of course, allowed to edit it the way you want to as long as it is not powerplaying another character.

2. In your appearance section, would you please remove the celebrity names? I would like you to tell me what your character looks like while imagining that I live under a rock and that I do not know who Megax Fox and Jennifer Love Hewitt are.

3. Just out of curiosity, if you did in fact plot this in details. Would you please tell me what was the creature that killed Melinda's father? You don't have to include this in your biography if you do not wish to. I simply would like to know for future reference.

Thanks, Melinda. Looking forward to reading your updated application.

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Archived Applications / Re: Camilla Abercrombie
« on: 04/12/2011 at 21:33 »
Hey Camilla,

Please have a look at the sample applications here . You can only write your character action but not others. Please revise and we'll have another look at your application. Thanks.


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Archived Applications / Re: Kalin Gabriel
« on: 02/12/2011 at 21:43 »

Mr Gabriel,

Congratulations! We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardy. Term begins on 1st January and you will receive further details closer to the time. In the meantime, please join us in the Summer or Elsewhere board.

Welcome to Hogwarts.



Regards,


Timothy Vartan
Hufflepuff HoH


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Archived Applications / Re: Melinda Dawn Westshire
« on: 02/12/2011 at 06:47 »
Dear Melinda,

Thank you for your interest in your application. Before I can approve you, I need you to expand more on her biography.

1. You requested first or second year, but mentioned that Melinda is thirteen. If she is thirteen, then she should be in third year.

2. Who is Michael Westshire? I assumed that he was Melinda's father? Can you please include this information. You can also expand on Jackson if you like. You can also expand on some more information that would flesh out her history more completely such as: How did her parents killed? Why? Wouldn't the aurors be searching for the murderer?

3. Since Melinda is thirteen, she has to have a guardian. I doubt that they would allow underage kids (of murdered parents) to live by themselves. Does she has a family? Was she adopted into another family?

4. Please include your sample RP in response to James or Astrid.

If you are not sure about this, please have a look at our sample applications here.


Regards,

Timothy

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Archived Applications / Re: Gau Draginoff Student
« on: 02/12/2011 at 00:49 »

Mr Draginoff,

Congratulations! We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted into Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardy. Term begins on 1st January and you will receive further details closer to the time. In the meantime, please join us in the Summer or Elsewhere board.

Welcome to Hogwarts.



Regards,


Timothy Vartan
Hufflepuff HoH

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Archived Applications / Re: Gau Draginoff Student
« on: 01/12/2011 at 05:34 »
Hello Gau,

Please refer to the PM I've sent to Demetri in regards of Gau.

Before I can accept this application, I'll need you to fix a couple of things:
1. As you are aware, we have Charms, Transfiguration, Divination and Conjuring/Summoning for Magical Strength and Weakness. I need you to edit Gau's.

2. Please fix your role playing response. Leave some room for Astrid to reply to your RP. You've been here for a while, you know the drill.  ;)



Regards,

Timothy

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