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Messages - Kathleen Ellwood-Luxe

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There's still a few a tense issues in the bio and roleplay response. I would suggest just reading through everything carefully before posting, you'll catch the change in tense with a bit of practice. :)

The roleplay response still doesn't offer a whole lot for the other writer to reply to but I think you'll get the hang of it once you get in some threads and plots on the site so...

Accepted!

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Archived Applications / Re: Lobelia Crowley Application
« on: 02/08/2014 at 18:02 »

Miss Crowley,

Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry has been accepted.

Term begins 01 September. Currently, students have gathered at the Summer Campus. Your admission is joint for both the school and the summer campus, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Regards,
Calla Locksley
Head of Hufflepuff

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Face Claim
« on: 28/07/2014 at 07:03 »
Can you please send me a PM with the face you'd like to use and who has it claimed?

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Levels?
« on: 27/07/2014 at 12:53 »
Hi Grimm!

Characters that are student age can only earn levels if they are enrolled in Hogwarts. The mistake with Verity's levels are my fault. I should have checked to see if she was a child or not before approving them. The character is now retired so it's no longer an issue but those levels would have become part of the 32 she could have claimed when becoming an adult.

Elsewhere children who are not enrolled in Hogwarts can fill out a helpdesk ticket when they become an adult and tell us how they would like the 32 levels dispersed.

I hope this clears everything up!

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Gringotts Exchange
« on: 14/07/2014 at 14:57 »
Hi Grimm!

I've created your Gringotts Exchange account which you can find here.

Unfortunately, we do not offer points for past terms so you'll have to start fresh, but there's plenty of opportunities to earn points!

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Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Irma Scrivner
« on: 13/07/2014 at 21:13 »
Accepted!

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Hey Vibuerus!

Your application is coming along nicely, there's just a few more things to clear up.

In the biography, you mention that Vibuerus was dropped off at the inn when he was born, in 1933. If he is eleven now, in 1942, that would make his birthday in 1931. If he was dropped off at the inn when he was around two, where did he live those first two years? If it's just a matter of mixing up dates, and he was dropped off right after being born, just go ahead and switch 1933 to 1931.

The next part that needs to be addressed is his first sign of magic. Young witches and wizards are really only capable of doing small bits of magic that first time. Something like being able to summon a small object to themselves or something like Harry unknowingly growing his hair back after it was cut. He wouldn't be capable of burning people with his arms. Please change that part of the biography.

Lastly, in your RP response, you say that Vibuerus runs off at the end. If this was a thread somewhere on the site, running away at the end would effectively end the thread and the idea is to keep the RP going. Running away doesn't give the other person much to respond to. I would consider revising to say something like 'he started to run off' as that gives the other writer the chance to stop him.

After you address these issues, if you could please repost your application below, we'll take another look! Thank you!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Harken Sadoke - child
« on: 13/07/2014 at 19:45 »
Accepted!

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TWINS.

TORIN IS MINE.

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Arden Cadwallader || Adult
« on: 30/06/2014 at 20:51 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Minita Aitken -- Elsewhere Child
« on: 30/06/2014 at 20:34 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Samuel Oliveroot
« on: 30/06/2014 at 20:22 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Ivory Calin [Adult]
« on: 30/06/2014 at 16:44 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Gwen Lacy
« on: 30/06/2014 at 16:29 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Neal Devlin
« on: 30/06/2014 at 16:11 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Gardenia Reine, Elsewhere Child
« on: 30/06/2014 at 15:14 »
Accepted!

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Deleting Posts?
« on: 26/06/2014 at 00:41 »
Hi Gardenia!

Yep, you're correct! Deleting posts is a staff thing. I've deleted the post you mentioned and don't worry too much! It's happened to all of us at one point.

Welcome to the site!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Harry Colville (WIP)
« on: 17/06/2014 at 13:50 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Sierra Devlin, Elsewhere Child
« on: 10/06/2014 at 17:13 »
Accepted!

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