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Messages - Calypso Ross

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Hi, Adelaide!

Your application looks good, there’s just one thing we’ll need to clarify before we can get you accepted.

You mention that you wish to have a connection with The Aetherius and then in your biography that Adelaide runs a shop in Diagon Alley. The Aetherius is a player-owned shop, meaning that it is ultimately up to the owner (Tessa Anderssen) whether or not Adelaide will be able to work there.

If you mean for Adelaide to be running a different shop, that’s totally fine — if you could edit out the requested connection to The Aetherius, this would resolve any confusion. You can also submit a shop permit so that Adelaide can have her own shop. More information and the shop application template can be found here. If you wish for her to be an employee of The Aetherius, you must receive permission from the owner first, and note this permission in your revised application.

Once you have made the required change, please repost your entire revised application below, and we’ll be more than happy to take another look. Please feel free to PM me with any questions. Thanks!

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Apollo Marquis - ReApp
« on: 31/12/2018 at 07:00 »
Hi, Apollo!

Your app looks great, there's just one thing you'll need to edit before we can get you accepted.

As per the Castle Dropout Rules, Apollo can't claim a 'new' set of levels. She is only eligible to claim 4 levels (2 for 1953-54, 2 for 1954-55) to add to her current levels (C3D1T2S2). You can add these 4 levels to any area, as long as your levels remain balanced.

Once you've made the required change to your new levels request, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Thanks!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Corvus Rose
« on: 22/12/2018 at 22:16 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8390.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Corvus Rose
« on: 22/12/2018 at 22:16 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Merryl Midthunder
« on: 20/12/2018 at 17:32 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8380.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Merryl Midthunder
« on: 20/12/2018 at 17:32 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Elsewhere Child | Bash
« on: 19/12/2018 at 20:56 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8371.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Elsewhere Child | Bash
« on: 19/12/2018 at 20:56 »
Accepted!

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Lottie Quailfoot
« on: 19/12/2018 at 20:54 »
Hi Lottie, welcome to the site!

Your application looks great so far, there was just one thing I wanted to clarify before we accept it.

At the end of the 'Personality' section, it looks like you've either forgotten to finish a sentence or you were going to delete that part but didn't manage to catch it all. If you wanted to add more to that part ('Lottie dislikes'...), you can repost your entire application below with the additions, and we'll be happy to take another look.

Alternatively, if that part was supposed to be deleted, just post below to let us know (no need to repost the whole application), and we can get you accepted as soon as possible. Thanks!

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Calix Glass
« on: 19/12/2018 at 20:43 »
Hi, Calix!

Your application looks good so far, there's just one thing you'll need to edit before we can get you accepted.

We ask that people applying for fourth year and above write slightly longer biographies of a minimum of 300 words. Yours falls a little short of this (around 200 words). If you could expand your biography to meet this requirement, that would be great.

Once you've made the required change, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Thanks!

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Student Applications / Re: Perseus Leo Perniger
« on: 19/12/2018 at 20:37 »
Hi Perseus, welcome to the site!

Your application's looking good so far, there's just a couple of things you need to edit before we can get you accepted.

You write in your biography that Persus got sorted into Ravenclaw. Whilst we do try to place people in their preferred house, this isn't always possible, which means that Perseus may not necessarily be a Ravenclaw. It's fine for you to leave the references to Perseus being a Ravenclaw in your RP sample (as we can assume that's just for the purposes of the sample), but you'll need to edit your biography to remove any direct mentions of him being in Ravenclaw, just in case we can't place him there.

You also mention that he'll be taking three electives next term, one of which is Divination. In our universe, Divination counts as a core class (levels being based on four cores: Charms, Divination, Transfiguration, and Conjuring/Summoning). If you could edit this to reflect that e.g. simply changing 'electives' to 'classes', or not mentioning Divination, that would resolve this.

Once you've made the required changes, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Thanks!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Lily McCormick // Babygirl
« on: 11/12/2018 at 12:33 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8339.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Lily McCormick // Babygirl
« on: 11/12/2018 at 12:33 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ARCHIVED: lydia graham||elsewhere teen
« on: 11/12/2018 at 12:31 »
This application has been archived, as a student application has been made here.

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Archived Applications / Re: lydia graham||elsewhere teen
« on: 11/12/2018 at 12:31 »
Archiving this application, as a student application has been made here.

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Alodia Summerbee
« on: 11/12/2018 at 12:27 »
Hi Alodia, welcome to the site!

Your application looks good so far, there's just one thing you'll need to edit before we can get you accepted.

Whilst we do try to place people in their preferred house, this isn't always possible. This means that Alodia might not necessarily be a Gryffindor. It's fine for you to leave the references to Alodia being a Gryffindor in your RP sample (as we can assume that's for the purposes of the sample, and not set in stone), but you'll need to edit your biography to remove any direct mentions of Alodia being in Gryffindor, just in case we can't place her there. You could simply delete the paragraph beginning 'She will never be sure...', and edit the reference to the Gryffindor Quidditch team to 'her house Quidditch team', and this would solve the issue.

Once you've made the required change, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look.

Thanks!

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Adults & Children / Re: Oliver Kyle | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 08/12/2018 at 13:22 »
Hi, Oliver!

Your application looks good so far, there's just a couple of things we'll need you to clarify before we can get you accepted.

Firstly, you have Oliver's birth year listed as 1993. Our site is currently set in the summer of 1955, which means that you'll need to adjust his birth year accordingly. Here is a useful tool to help you work that out.

Secondly, you mention Oliver's hair colour fading to white. Does this have a particular significance for/is it related to your planned plot for Oliver? If so, we'll need you to submit a special request for it. If not, please could you clarify in your biography that this is simply a genetic quirk with no real significance.

Once you've made the required change(s), please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. Thanks!

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Student Applications / Re: Emrys Blue
« on: 05/12/2018 at 23:05 »
Hi, Emrys!

Your app looks good, there's just a couple of changes to make before we can get you accepted.

You have Emrys's birth year down as October 1939. If you want him to be the age of a typical fourth year (14, turning 15 in the school year), he would be born in 1940. (If you get your second preference of fifth year, he would be born in 1939). If this was a mistake and you want to change it, you can edit this to 1940.

In your RP sample, you also write the following:
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So he packed up his bags and, without a word, returned to Hogwarts for the summer.

Students aren't allowed to stay at Hogwarts over the summer. If you could edit this either to refer to Camp Loki, our summer camp for students, or to another more general area such as Hogsmeade, this would resolve this issue.

Once you've made the required change, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Thanks!

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Archived Applications / Re: Phoenix Starr [WIP]
« on: 04/12/2018 at 16:40 »
Hi, Phoenix, welcome back!

Your application looks great -- I just wanted to let you know that you're actually entitled to 8 levels, not 6 like you requested (2 per term for 1951-52, 52-53, 53-54, and 54-55). You also only added 5 levels, instead of 6, to your original requested levels.

Your current levels are C2D2T2S4, and you can add the extra 8 levels anywhere you like, as long as they remain balanced (lowest level at least half of highest level). Feel free to message me if you have any questions about this!

No need to repost your whole application, if you could just post below with your requested levels for the new term, we can get you accepted ASAP.

(Your app title is still listed as a WIP -- it looks complete to me now, but if that's not the case and you are still working on it, please let me know! You'll need to repost your complete application below when you finish it.)

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Shop Permits / APPROVED: Rosewright Books || shop permit.
« on: 13/11/2018 at 14:21 »
Congratulations! This shop has been approved.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8277.0

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