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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Teagan Maxwell
« on: 30/08/2018 at 23:05 »
Hi Teagan, and welcome!

Your application looks great, but there's one thing I would like to clear up before we can go ahead and get you accepted. In your biography, you state:

The twins grew up to be a lady and a gentleman, both excelled in muggle studies and basic magic.

But given that you are applying for Teagan to be a first year, she would not have had the chance to practice magic yet. Magic, unless accidental, is forbidden to all underage witches and wizards. If you could simply remove this passage from your application, we will be happy to give it another look!

Thanks!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Valentina Whitewood
« on: 30/08/2018 at 22:45 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins on September 1st.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8264.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Valentina Whitewood
« on: 30/08/2018 at 22:45 »
Dear Miss Whitewood,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Louise Holland
« on: 24/08/2018 at 01:33 »
Hi Louise and welcome to our site!

I loved reading your application! However, your sample roleplay, while it was also a wonderful read, does not respond to either of the two prompts provided in the application form.

If you could please repost your entire revised application below and instead respond to either Evangeline in Option 1 or to Hugh in Option 2, we'll be glad to give your application another look!

Thank you

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Jude Francis Holiday
« on: 23/08/2018 at 23:52 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins on September 1st.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8237.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Jude Francis Holiday
« on: 23/08/2018 at 23:51 »
Dear Mr. Holiday,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Lupin Sol | Elsewhere Child
« on: 09/08/2018 at 22:25 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8213.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Lupin Sol | Elsewhere Child
« on: 09/08/2018 at 22:25 »
Accepted!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Gabriel Klauser
« on: 05/08/2018 at 03:00 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8195.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Gabriel Klauser
« on: 05/08/2018 at 02:59 »
Dear Mr. Klauser,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Gilroy Locke
« on: 05/08/2018 at 02:47 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8194.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Gilroy Locke
« on: 05/08/2018 at 02:46 »
Dear Mr. Locke,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8193.0

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Dear Miss Reina,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Kyan Drayce
« on: 05/08/2018 at 01:42 »
Hi Kyan!

I really enjoyed reading your application! However, before it can be accepted, in your rp sample, you control the actions of Hugh's rat. Given that this is Hugh's pet and he may have wanted to decide for himself what the rat would do, this would be considered power playing.

Once you've removed or edited these passages, please repost your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to give it another look!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8174.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Maia Nettlebed | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 15/06/2018 at 00:03 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Johann Doe | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 27/04/2018 at 01:13 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8126.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Johann Doe | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 27/04/2018 at 01:09 »
Accepted!

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Archived Applications / Re: Zion Thomas
« on: 27/04/2018 at 00:59 »
Miss Thomas,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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