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Messages - Marina Lamont

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Hi Adelaide!

Thanks for making the change Caly requested! However, I noticed one more small problem with your application. In the levels section, the application form specifies:

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The number of levels on the lowest ability must be at least half of the highest ability.

Adelaide's lowest abilities are at 5 and your highest is at 12. To have a Transfiguration level of 12, your lowest abilities would need to be at least at 6. You could either put more points into Divination and Summoning or move a single point from Transfiguration to another ability.

Once you've made those changes, please repost your entire revised application and we'll give it another look.

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8423.0

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Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Min-hee Song | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 05/01/2019 at 06:30 »
Hi Min-hee!

Welcome to our site, your application was truly a great read and I can't wait to see you posting on our boards!

However, before I can accept your application, there are a few issues with your Roleplay Sample. First of all, at the end of it, Min-hee leaves. While this is only a sample, and Joshua will obviously never reply, we would prefer that you treat it as if this were a real thread, in which he would. By leaving so soon, you allow him no opportunity to respond.

Additionally, in the second paragraph of the roleplay sample, you slip into present tense:
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She was near-sighted and rarely wears her glasses when she goes out, she hates it when her glasses gets foggy.
While it's fine to use the present tense for your biography, the roleplay sample will need to be in the past tense, as this is what we use on our site.

If you could please edit these issues and post your entire revised application as a reply to this thread, we will be happy to take another look!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Remy // Elsewhere Teen
« on: 03/01/2019 at 22:52 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8414.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Remy // Elsewhere Teen
« on: 03/01/2019 at 22:50 »
Accepted!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Lottie Quailfoot
« on: 20/12/2018 at 05:33 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins on January 1st.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8378.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Lottie Quailfoot
« on: 20/12/2018 at 05:33 »
Dear Miss Quailfoot,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Basil Razi
« on: 19/12/2018 at 01:36 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins on January 1st 2019.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8368.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Basil Razi
« on: 19/12/2018 at 01:35 »
Dear Mr. Razi,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Eden Sparrow Student App
« on: 18/12/2018 at 23:12 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins on January 1st 2019.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8367.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Eden Sparrow Student App
« on: 18/12/2018 at 23:08 »
Dear Miss Sparrow,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.


Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

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Student Applications / Re: Ezra Cotsworld
« on: 14/12/2018 at 05:40 »
Hi Ezra!

Welcome back to the RP lifestyle, we're glad to have you! However, before we can take a closer look at your application, you appear to have forgotten to include the latter sections of the Application form. Most importantly, the Roleplay Sample.

If you take another look at the template, you'll see a light blue/purple section at the very botton. At the top of that box is a link that reads [Select]. If you click that, it will automatically highlight the complete form and all the formatting that goes with it, which you can copy and paste to make your life a whole lot easier.

Secondly, while we'll always try to honour your first choice, we do ask that you indicate a second preference for which year you'd like Ezra to be in.

Lastly, we ask that your username be the full name of your character. To change your username, you'll need to submit a Helpdesk ticket indicating what you'd like it to be changed to.


Once you've done all this, please reply to this thread to post your entire revised application. We'll be more than happy to give your application another look.

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8299.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Iris Winters | Elsewhere Teen
« on: 25/10/2018 at 23:49 »
Accepted!

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Hi Rowena and welcome to Hogwarts!

I loved reading your bio. I can't wait to see if Rowena ends up finding out about her true lineage!

However, in your roleplay samble, you control Janey's actions in addition to Rowena's. This is powerplaying, and goes against site rules.

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You may control only your character. You cannot post that someone’s character did something or said something without having that player's permission beforehand. This includes impersonating another character, or determining whether a spell your character uses affects the other character. An example of this would be:
          Correct: John asked Helen to come along, hoping that she would follow him to see the Squid. 
          Incorrect: John asked Helen to come along. Helen replied with a yes.

If you could please rewrite your sample application to remove all instances of powerplaying, you can than repost your entire revised application and we'll be more than happy to give it another look.

Thank you,
Marina

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Clara Fawe | Elsewhere Teen
« on: 25/10/2018 at 17:35 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8297.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Clara Fawe | Elsewhere Teen
« on: 25/10/2018 at 17:35 »
Accepted!

Bear in mind that, should you choose to apply Clara as a student in December, you will need to place a special request with the admins in order for her to bring her raven along as a pet.

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Adults & Children / Re: Child Application
« on: 18/10/2018 at 23:15 »
Hi Zolderane and welcome to our site!

Your application is nicely detailed, and that's always wonderful to see!

However, before we can accept your application, there are some issues with your Roleplay sample.

First, you mention several times that Zolderane is already proficient in magic. However, children are not issued a wand until they are admitted to Hogwarts in the summer before their first year. This means Zolderane would not be able to practice nor perform the spells mentioned in your sample.

For more information on how magic works on this site, feel free to look over our Magical Rules.

Furthermore, in your roleplay samble, you control Janey's actions in addition to Zoldane's. This is powerplaying, and goes against site rules.

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You may control only your character. You cannot post that someone’s character did something or said something without having that player's permission beforehand. This includes impersonating another character, or determining whether a spell your character uses affects the other character. An example of this would be:
          Correct: John asked Helen to come along, hoping that she would follow him to see the Squid. 
          Incorrect: John asked Helen to come along. Helen replied with a yes.

Once you've made the required changes, please repost your entire revised application and we'll be more than happy to give it another look.

Thank you,
Marina

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Mathilda Woods
« on: 21/09/2018 at 03:17 »
Accepted!

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