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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8178.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Reginald Lark | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 02/07/2018 at 08:42 »
Accepted!

(Also, just a reminder that if you want to thread out any darker plots on the board and/or use any magical artifacts that haven't been already approved, you'll need to check in with us first.)

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8169.0

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Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Stephen Arthur Lemahieu
« on: 10/06/2018 at 09:50 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8167.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Stephen Arthur Lemahieu
« on: 10/06/2018 at 09:49 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Kate Mumford | Okay Adult
« on: 10/06/2018 at 09:43 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8166.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Kate Mumford | Okay Adult
« on: 10/06/2018 at 09:42 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Constance Anne May
« on: 10/06/2018 at 09:40 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8164.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Constance Anne May
« on: 10/06/2018 at 09:39 »
Accepted!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8151.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Verona Dettlaff | Elsewhere Adult
« on: 05/05/2018 at 21:30 »
Accepted!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=8149.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Gabriel Klauser l Elsewhere Child
« on: 05/05/2018 at 21:23 »
Accepted!

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Alex Thompson
« on: 29/04/2018 at 19:48 »
Hi Alex, welcome back!

Your application looks great, there's just a couple of small details we'll need you to edit before we can get you accepted.

Firstly, your birth year for Alex is down as June 1937, which would make her the age of a sixth year. If she's a fourth year, her birth year will be 1939 (or 1938 if she's a fifth year). If you could edit either her birth year or your year choices, that'd fix this inconsistency.

Secondly, at the end of your RP sample, you write:

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she jumped and touched her shoulders and yelled “Booo!”


If Evangeline were another player rather than just an NPC, touching her might be considered powerplaying, as you haven't given her player a choice to decide. If you could either edit that part to read something like 'she jumped, intending to touch her shoulders, and yelled' or simply delete the 'touched her shoulders' part, that would resolve this.

Once you've made the required changes, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Thanks!

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Archived Applications / Re: Beatrice Blythe
« on: 27/04/2018 at 20:27 »
Archiving at request of player.

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Zion Thomas
« on: 25/04/2018 at 09:01 »
Hi, Zion!

Your application looks good, there's just a couple of things you'll still need to edit.

Firstly, now that you've changed your year preferences, Zion's birth year is now a few years out. She'll have been born in 1939 if she's a third year (or 1938 if she's fourth).

Secondly, in your RP sample, you're still controlling Hugh's rat, which might be considered a form of powerplay. You'll need to remove the following lines from your RP sample before we can accept you:

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She scooped the small animal up.She raised the rat up, examining it close to her face. She stroked his head, deciding that she was going to keep it as a pet.

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holding the rat in her hands as she spied on the boy.

You can definitely have Zion attempt to pick up the rat instead (e.g. 'Zion attempted to scoop the small animal up, hoping she could keep it as a pet'), if that's something you'd like her to do. However, it would ultimately be up to Hugh's player whether his rat allows itself to be caught, so you can't decide whether she actually manages to pick the rat up.

Once you've made the required changes, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions. Thanks!

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Archived Applications / Re: Zion Thomas
« on: 19/04/2018 at 11:00 »
Archiving! More recent application here.

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