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Liam Cimorelli

    (17/04/2016 at 22:45)
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E L S E W H E R E   A D U L T

CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Liam Orion Cimorelli
Gender: Male
Age: Twenty-eight
Blood Status: Muggleborn

Education: 
Slytherin '36

Residence:
Owns the family farm in New Orleans, U.S.
Resides in a flat in London

Occupation
Healer

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the Ministry, Shrieking Shack) or to take over an existing shop in need of new management?
St. Mungo's

Requested Magic Levels:

  • Charms: 7
  • Divination: 7/i]
  • Transfiguration: 6
  • Summoning: 12
Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
No

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Biography: (300 words minimum.)
Born to muggles, Lily and Shane, the eldest Cimorelli child surprised them both by producing magic when he was three months old. He, of course, doesn’t remember but apparently he used his rattle to cover himself up with his blanket. They didn’t want to believe what was going on, but soon, their next four children were also special. Emeline, Lila and Apollo, and then little Harmonia.
Living in New Orleans, Louisiana, Liam went to Salem first, whilst his younger siblings were homeschooled. Living on a farm, the kids were no strangers to hard work. (You would notice this with one look at Liam’s hands) Before starting school at eleven, the eldest boy worked sun up to sun down, helping his father provide for their family. He didn’t always enjoy it, but he did grow to appreciate it. 
Upon graduating, Liam moved to London to be a Junior Healer at St. Mungo’s. There, he excelled and the craft came easy to him. He found an amazing woman, Darlena Greene, and they had moved into a flat together. She was an Auror-in-training, and their relationship was near perfect, or so he thought. But, unfortunately, the young woman wasn’t ready for a family. His family.
Around midnight on a chilly night, Liam heard a loud crack come from the fireplace in the living room. He got up, grabbed his wand, and went to investigate. There stood his four siblings; Emeline (14), Apollo and Lila (12), and little Harmony (6) with a Ministry official. Confusion overcame his face, but he knew something had happened, for they were all crying with suitcases in their hands. After tucking all of his siblings into a pallet of blanket on the floor of the guest bedroom, the official had told him something was happening to muggles, and regrettably, his parents were a part of that.
The next morning, he went house hunting while Darlena spent time with the kids, trying to distract them. He found a house big enough for them all, but it wasn’t the farm. He knew that, and he wanted desperately to take away the pain he seen in their eyes. His generous mentor at St. Mungo’s loaned him the money to buy the house, which he quickly repaid after taking a second job. He took the children to the farm to gather everything they wanted, and then they moved into their new home.
It was rough, but they made it work. It was only a year into the eighteen year old being their primary caretaker for Darlena to leave him. Claiming it was too stressful being, in plain terms, a mother to Harmony. It hurt Liam very much, but he loved his siblings more than he loved her. They were now his world. Nothing could get in the way of that, not even love.
They did happy going to at Hogwarts, so that took a huge load off his back. By the time Harmony started, Liam was a well established Healer, and he could afford nicer things for them. He didn’t mind having to go without so they could get what they wanted. Even though he knew his parents’ disappearance wasn’t his fault, he still felt like he owed them more.
Now, Lila and Apollo have moved out to pursue their own lives and dreams. Soon after, Emeline couldn’t find another job, and she expressed her guilt about it. Of course, Liam said it didn’t matter to him. He was making well enough to support his family still after working at St. Mungo’s for nearly ten years. But she wouldn’t hear it. Soon her bags were packed and she had moved in with her little sister. Fortunately, between Hogwarts and Camp, Harmony was rarely home. Liam was beginning to feel a little empty nowadays. He heard someone call it Empty Nest Syndrome.



Roleplay Response: Two
Today was the typical winter's day. The wind was blowing ever so slightly, nipping at every exposed ear in the sea of people. Kids were running around, shouting and laughing. Adults were chatting wildly about anything and everything. Some shops even had their Christmas decorations up. The snow falling just perfected the snow globe image.

The sight brought a smile to the eldest Cimorelli's face. He didn't care much for errands normally, but today, he looked forward to it. His youngest sister Harmonia would be home from Hogwarts for winter break, and here he was buying food and gifts. It felt like a lifetime since had laid eyes on her, though they did send owls two or three times a week. It just wasn't the same though.

As for the rest of his siblings, he was unsure if they would come home, but he had hoped. He was due to have lunch with Lila soon, but both of their schedules were so full, it was extremely hard.

"Coming through! Coming th--- arrrgh!"

He heard faintly behind him, but paid no attention. Crystal blue eyes were focused on a new set of dress robes. The set he had were getting to be old and worn. Perhaps he should--Liam found himself on the ground, face in the snow.

"For Merlin's sake!" he heard an older man's voice yell. "I am so sorry! This blasted snow!"

Sitting up on his knees, his gloved hands wiped the snow off. He shook his head, trying to get the wetness out of his shaggy hair. No such luck.

"Are you okay, sir?" hand held out for him.


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How did you find us? I have a special set of skills....*in Liam Neeson voice*


* Martin Hawksworth

    (26/04/2016 at 22:55)
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Hi Liam!

Your application is coming along well. What interesting and strange circumstances must have  hit those two muggle parents when all of their children ended up being magically-inclined. This likely wouldn't happen normally, but who knows, maybe if both parents had the equivalent of a recessive 'magical' gene ;)

I do have a question about where Liam went to school and which school he graduated from. You state that he graduated in 1936 as a Slytherin, which implies that he attended Hogwarts, but you mention in his Biography that he attended the Salem institute. If he did in fact attend Hogwarts for a couple years before graduating, what pushed him toward transferring schools? If you had meant that he actually schooled at Salem, then simply make that alteration with his Education status.

Also, once the timewarp hit everyone, many of the previous lives of young adults or children were uprooted in part because their homes disappeared (maybe in the 30s the place was undeveloped) or were owned by a different muggle family. If Liam did return to the location that he remembered was his home, the current residents (if there were any) would definitely be bothered by his presence. In the slide back in time, all items that belonged to the family that may have been time appropriate to the 70s (electronics, clothing, etc.) would have disappeared. So, Liam wouldn't own that farm in New Orleans any longer and he wouldn't have been able to return to it and find anything worth salvaging, most likely.

Give these things some thought and then make a couple small adjustments to your application. Simply reply below with the entire edited application and we will be happy to take another look.



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Liam Cimorelli

    (27/04/2016 at 07:53)
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E L S E W H E R E   A D U L T

CHARACTER INFORMATION
Character Name: Liam Orion Cimorelli
Gender: Male
Age: Twenty-eight
Blood Status: Muggleborn

Education: 
Slytherin '36

Residence:
Owns the family farm in New Orleans, U.S.
Resides in a flat in London

Occupation
Healer

Do you plan to have a connection to a particular existing place (for example: the Ministry, Shrieking Shack) or to take over an existing shop in need of new management?
St. Mungo's

Requested Magic Levels:

  • Charms: 7
  • Divination: 7/i]
  • Transfiguration: 6
  • Summoning: 12
Do you wish to be approved as a group with any other characters? If so who and for what IC reason?
No

Please list any other characters you already have at the site:


Biography: (300 words minimum.)
Born to muggles, Lily and Shane, the eldest Cimorelli child surprised them both by producing magic when he was three months old. He, of course, doesn’t remember but apparently he used his rattle to cover himself up with his blanket. They didn’t want to believe what was going on, but soon, their next four children were also special. Emeline, Lila and Apollo, and then little Harmonia.
Living in New Orleans, Louisiana, Liam went to Hogwarts first, whilst his younger siblings were home-schooled. Living on a farm, the kids were no strangers to hard work. (You would notice this with one look at Liam’s hands) Before starting school at eleven, the eldest boy worked sun up to sun down, helping his father provide for their family. He didn’t always enjoy it, but he did grow to appreciate it. 
Upon graduating, Liam moved to London to be a Junior Healer at St. Mungo’s. There, he excelled and the craft came easy to him. He found an amazing woman, Darlena Greene, and they had moved into a flat together. She was an Auror-in-training, and their relationship was near perfect, or so he thought. But, unfortunately, the young woman wasn’t ready for a family. His family.
Around midnight on a chilly night, Liam heard a loud crack come from the fireplace in the living room. He got up, grabbed his wand, and went to investigate. There stood his four siblings; Emeline (14), Apollo and Lila (12), and little Harmony (6) with a Ministry official. Confusion overcame his face, but he knew something had happened, for they were all crying with suitcases in their hands. After tucking all of his siblings into a pallet of blanket on the floor of the guest bedroom, the official had told him something was happening to muggles, and regrettably, his parents were a part of that.
The next morning, he went house hunting while Darlena spent time with the kids, trying to distract them. He found a house big enough for them all, but it wasn’t the farm. He knew that, and he wanted desperately to take away the pain he seen in their eyes. His generous mentor at St. Mungo’s loaned him the money to buy the house, which he quickly repaid after taking a second job.
It was rough, but they made it work. It was only a year into the eighteen year old being their primary caretaker for Darlena to leave him. Claiming it was too stressful being, in plain terms, a mother to Harmony. It hurt Liam very much, but he loved his siblings more than he loved her. They were now his world. Nothing could get in the way of that, not even love.
They did seem happy attending Hogwarts, so that took a huge load off his back. By the time Harmony started, Liam was a well established Healer, and he could afford nicer things for them. He didn’t mind having to go without so they could get what they wanted. Even though he knew his parents’ disappearance wasn’t his fault, he still felt like he owed them more.
Now, Lila and Apollo have moved out to pursue their own lives and dreams. Soon after, Emeline couldn’t find another job, and she expressed her guilt about it. Of course, Liam said it didn’t matter to him. He was making well enough to support his family still after working at St. Mungo’s for nearly ten years. But she wouldn’t hear it. Soon her bags were packed and she had moved in with her little sister. Fortunately, between Hogwarts and Camp, Harmony was rarely home. Liam was beginning to feel a little empty nowadays. He heard someone call it Empty Nest Syndrome.



Roleplay Response: Two
Today was the typical winter's day. The wind was blowing ever so slightly, nipping at every exposed ear in the sea of people. Kids were running around, shouting and laughing. Adults were chatting wildly about anything and everything. Some shops even had their Christmas decorations up. The snow falling just perfected the snow globe image.

The sight brought a smile to the eldest Cimorelli's face. He didn't care much for errands normally, but today, he looked forward to it. His youngest sister Harmonia would be home from Hogwarts for winter break, and here he was buying food and gifts. It felt like a lifetime since had laid eyes on her, though they did send owls two or three times a week. It just wasn't the same though.

As for the rest of his siblings, he was unsure if they would come home, but he had hoped. He was due to have lunch with Lila soon, but both of their schedules were so full, it was extremely hard.

"Coming through! Coming th--- arrrgh!"

He heard faintly behind him, but paid no attention. Crystal blue eyes were focused on a new set of dress robes. The set he had were getting to be old and worn. Perhaps he should--Liam found himself on the ground, face in the snow.

"For Merlin's sake!" he heard an older man's voice yell. "I am so sorry! This blasted snow!"

Sitting up on his knees, his gloved hands wiped the snow off. He shook his head, trying to get the wetness out of his shaggy hair. No such luck.

"Are you okay, sir?" hand held out for him.


OTHER
How did you find us? I have a special set of skills....*in Liam Neeson voice*

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    (30/04/2016 at 07:44)
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Accepted, lovely! <3
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