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Messages - Vincenzo Nicolosi
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« on: 18/07/2014 at 20:09 »
Mr. Camila, Thank you for your application to Hogwarts, and welcome to the community! Your application is looking great, there are just a few things that I need to point out before we can accept you. In your biography you say that Leonardo is living with his parents, who are muggles. Because of the site plot called The Timewarp, all the muggles that Leonardo would have known before the year 1937, would have seemed to disappear. Of course there is a possibility that his parents could still be around, but that would have to be requested and given permission from an Admin. If you could please take this information and use it to edit your profile, we can go ahead and get you approved. Please post your edited profile as a reply to this topic. Thank you, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 18/07/2014 at 19:58 »
Accepted!
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« on: 18/07/2014 at 19:54 »
Mr. Di Calia, Thank you for your application! It is looking wonderful, but before we can accept you, I just have a few questions about some points in your biography. You said that Sergio's mother was a muggle. How did a pureblood wizard and a muggle meet to have Sergio? Why would she object to quidditch? After the incident where all muggles disappeared, how did Sergio and his father react to her disappearing? If you could elaborate on these points, then we'll get you set up and accepted to play at Hoggies. If you have any questions about the timewarp, you can read the information here.Please reply to this topic with your edited profile, rather than editing the first post. Thank you, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 18/07/2014 at 19:37 »
Accepted!
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« on: 11/07/2014 at 04:55 »
Dear Vibuerus,
Thank you applying to Hoggies again. We are glad to see you back and wanting to jump back in on the action. Before we can accept your new character biography, there are a few discrepancies in your bio that need to be addressed.
You mention in your biography that Vibuerus was abandoned as a child because of War. The war that is currently happening on the site plot is World War II, which Wizarding Britain did not join in until 1938. You mention him wandering around the inn as soon as he could walk, which would have made him around two years of age at that time. It is currently 1942 in our site plot, so in the end Vibuerus would be no older than six. If you could perhaps edit this explanation, or give an idea at what age Vibuerus was left at the Innkeepers' doorstep this would help clear up the confusion about his age.
Another conflict in your biography is that compared to book canon, which our site is based off of, if Vibuerus grew up in an Inn that is on or close to Diagon Alley then would have been exposed to a lot of magic indirectly and directly. There would be wand shops, broom supply shops, magical pet shops, and everything relating to wizarding Britain right there on that street, meaning he would know what magic was and know how to recognize it.
Also, considering he had been reading about magic, it does not make sense that he would be confused by appearing to have magic ability. The Innkeepers need to be a wizard and a witch to have a place on Diagon Alley, so again Vibuerus would not have had any real reason to suspect he was adopted.
If you could please fix these conflicting facts in his biography, we will be happy to read it over again and try to get you approved quickly.
Also, as to your previous account Grimm Palatar, we do not delete accounts for simply being inactive for a term or two. Your account is still there for you to log into and if you wish to continue roleplaying Grimm as a Hogwarts student all you need to do is reapply him in his new year when student applications open on August 1st.
Sincerely, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 19/05/2014 at 17:03 »
An NPC of your own creation, is fine to kill off.
You only need to fill out a wiki page if you are killing one of your applied characters, or special request if you want to kill someone else's character (they also need to agree to that also).
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« on: 27/02/2014 at 19:29 »
Accepted!
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« on: 27/02/2014 at 17:37 »
Accepted.
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« on: 27/02/2014 at 16:54 »
Mr. Winters,
Thank you for creating Tiberius's account and editing your profile. Because this is supposed to be an example of what sort of posts you would find on our boards, I just ask that you look over your rp one more time and reconsider the action of Tiberius walk away from the scene. That action ends the rp rather than allowing the other character to respond.
If you could just fix that up so that Mr. Campbell could respond after Tiberius's actions, that will be all.
Thank you, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 27/02/2014 at 04:53 »
Mr. Winters,
Thank you for your application to HS.net. I have to say everything looks good in your profile except a few small things. Once they get cleared up we will be happy to accept the application.
First of all, the this is an application for Tiberius, and not Mathias. If you could please post the application with Tiberius's account then that problem is easily fixed.
The second thing that I noticed was your roleplay response. This is supposed to be a response to another person in an rp thread. It is not considered good rp etiquette to control or assume what another person's character is doing. If you could please edit your response so that you are only controlling Tiberius's actions then everything will look perfect.
Thank you again for your application, and we will be waiting for your corrections.
Sincerely, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 13/02/2014 at 19:17 »
Miss Morre,
Thank you for your application to Hogwarts! We are quite excited to have you here, and can not wait to see what Elizabeth will be up to. Just taking a bit of time on your application because, I just want to know if you asked Rosemarie for her permission to write about her in your character's biography.
It is a small thing, but extremely important to know.
Once we know we can go ahead and get your application approved.
Thank you, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 01/01/2014 at 18:34 »
Accepted.
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« on: 11/12/2013 at 22:48 »
Miss Mullins,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 January, 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School.Regards, Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 10/12/2013 at 00:58 »
Mr Marlowe,
Congratulations, your application to Hogwarts School has been accepted. Term begins 01 January, 2014. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the School.Regards, Kristoffer Carlisle,
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« on: 10/12/2013 at 00:20 »
Hello Alexaires,
Thank you filling out the special request form. Though we can not accept your profile at this time for just a couple of reasons.
- Until your special request is accepted we can not accept your application. If you want your application to be accepted before your special request is approved, you will need to take out the parts involving Alexaires being a werewolf and having scars.
- As Theodore said before, the site rating is PG-13 site. This means that any reference to extreme violence (such as kidnapping, and torture), should not be given too much focus.
Also, just a note to help you when it comes to bloodline and rping it. The Ministry requires all citizens of Wizarding Britain to register their Blood Status. So in all likelihood if he does not know his Bloodline, then he will be given a badge saying he is a Muggleborn, or Halfblood unless he goes ahead and gets his blood tested.
Once you edit your profile with these things in mind, we will go ahead and read your application again.
Thank you for taking the time to read this, and we hope to see your edited profile up soon.
- Kristoffer Carlisle
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« on: 23/08/2013 at 17:42 »
Transfer Application
→ CHARACTER INFORMATION. Name: Kristoffer Alexei Henri Carlisle
Birthday: February 10, 1924
Hometown:Strasbourg, France
Bloodline: Pureblood
Current Levels: C5D3T5S5
Current Year:2de
Year Requested:5th
Reason for Transfer: Although Clause Carlisle lives and works in France (and even prefers it to Great Britain), he does not like the changes happening with the inclusion of the German Government. He knows his son is special, and he knows there is a lot of advantages with using Kristoffer’s to achieve certain means. He is sending his son to Hogwarts while he can to protect him, along with protecting other things.
Biography: Clause Albert Carlisle had two legitimate children, and one illegitimate child. His oldest son Andrei could do no wrong. He was intelligent, polite, and talented, everything that his father could ever ask for. It was seven years later that his second son was born, and a year after that his wife died, and his first love had died. Clause had hoped that his son would be as perfect as his first son, but that was too much to expect out of the boy.
Everything Kristoffer did was different, along with slower than how his brother started. Andrei had said his first word at the age of eight months his first words had been “mother” and “father” in french, Kristoffer had just smiled and babbled until he was almost two years old, his first word had been, “no”. And he had screamed this word for several months before finally saying more than that. Andrei’s talent for magic had manifested by the age of 7, while Kristoffer’s talent had not been apparent until a week after his eleventh birthday. It was these incidents that had Clause worry that Kristoffer was his son. With blonde hair, and brown eyes he looked drastically different than his father and mother, and in the end this made him reject his child, denying that such a thing could happen.
Kristoffer at first was confused by this. He did what he could to receive his father’s attention. He tried to be a good child, to follow in his brother’s footsteps and yet there was something always pulling him off of that path. A small distraction that ended his attempts in disaster. A wrong word that would make him lose his temper and in the end, send him to his room.
Kristoffer thought this would change after he learned he had another brother. He thought that, it was simply because he was the youngest he had gotten scrutinized and dejected by his father.
That did not turn out to be true.
It took Kristoffer until the age of twelve to realize that his father was not going to give him the love he thought he deserved. So in the end, he was going to earn it. He may not know exactly how, but all it takes is a bit of trial and error.
Recently with things heating up in Europe, he found out he has some value to his family, that he did not think was important before. Of course he knew his abilities made him special, but his father had never seemed to care about them until of course it looked like it would put Kristoffer in danger.
→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.
[Hogwarts] House Request: Slytherin
Personality: The first things you will realize about Kristoffer is that he has the personality that you would recognize and remember after a first meeting. He is highly opinionated, and is not afraid of voicing his thoughts on things (even if it is an unpopular opinion). He comes off as confident, and certainly is the sort to lead pranks, cause mayhem, and also be the center of attention. Of course, this personality is only a first impression. The more you get to know him, the more you realize that he is actually putting on a strong act to hide his insecurities and weaknesses. Untrusting of most people, he is always trying to show he is the best and gets frustrated when he puts in so much effort, and someone else gets the prize. He is generally quite social, but at times where he is troubled he slinks off to be by himself. He used to have the habit of having his hair change color with his emotions, but that trait has recently stopped as he aged. His hair will still change color with his mood, but only when the emotions are strong and he is unguarded.
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« on: 18/10/2012 at 19:01 »
Application for Beauxbatons Academy
→ CHARACTER INFORMATION. Name: Kristoffer Alexei Henri Carlisle
Birthday: February 10, 1924
Hometown: Strasbourg, France
Bloodline: Pureblood
Magical Strength (pick one): Charms
Magical Weakness (pick one): Divination
Year (pick two): 2nd or 3rd
Biography: Clause Albert Carlisle had two legitimate children, and one illegitimate child. His oldest son Andrei could do no wrong. He was intelligent, polite, and talented, everything that his father could ever ask for. It was seven years later that his second son was born, and a year after that his wife died, and his first love had died. Clause had hoped that his son would be as perfect as his first son, but that was too much to expect out of the boy.
Everything Kristoffer did was different, along with slower than how his brother started. Andrei had said his first word at the age of eight months his first words had been “mother” and “father” in french, Kristoffer had just smiled and babbled until he was almost two years old, his first word had been, “no”. And he had screamed this word for several months before finally saying more than that. Andrei’s talent for magic had manifested by the age of 7, while Kristoffer’s talent had not been apparent until a week after his eleventh birthday. It was these incidents that had Clause worry that Kristoffer was his son. With blonde hair, and brown eyes he looked drastically different than his father and mother, and in the end this made him reject his child, denying that such a thing could happen.
Kristoffer at first was confused by this. He did what he could to receive his father’s attention. He tried to be a good child, to follow in his brother’s footsteps and yet there was something always pulling him off of that path. A small distraction that ended his attempts in disaster. A wrong word that would make him lose his temper and in the end, send him to his room.
Kristoffer thought this would change after he learned he had another brother. He thought that, it was simply because he was the youngest he had gotten scrutinized and dejected by his father.
That did not turn out to be true.
It took Kristoffer until the age of twelve to realize that his father was not going to give him the love he thought he deserved. So in the end, he was going to earn it. He may not know exactly how, but all it takes is a bit of trial and error.
→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.
Ecole Request: Humanities
Personality: Kristoffer does not like being ignored, neither does he like being a victim of ridicule. If something is out of balance in his life, he works to fix it. There are moments where he is rather talkative, and moments where he doesn’t say anything at all. He’ll disappear if he does not want to be around people, and when he wants to be around someone they won’t shake him so easily. He goes after what he wants, and if he can’t get it he works to make sure others don’t have it. He is intelligent, thoughtful, and can be quite focused in a problem until he finds a solution.
Appearance:Average height (for his age), blonde hair and brown eyes he is the odd one out in his family.
→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.Please reply to the Sample Roleplay below. “Sorry?” The feeling of something warm and wet upon his back was not pleasant. The snickers from his peers were also something that he would not abide as he turned to look at the girl that had simply said, Sorry in response to the humiliation she had given him. That was not all this girl had to say. Kristoffer was not the sort that would simply take an apology and let something go. This girl owed him.
“No, Sorry is not going to cut it.”
His tone had been indignant, demanding, and angry. His brown eyes bore down on the girl that had splattered food on him. Removing his jacket he looked at the damage that her food had wrought upon his once clean uniform. It was easy to clean up with a charm, but that was not the point. She had humiliated him, and he was not going to let her get away with that. There was no apology for that when it came down to it.
Tossing his jacket down upon the bench he looked back at the girl his chin tilting up slightly as he gave her a thoughtful look. He would need to give her a suitable punishment for her transgression but what would work? His eyes glanced back down at his jacket before looking at Hilary again. Jaw tensing, before the corners of his lips began to curl up as he thought of what she could do for her penance. He took a step forward, that maniacal smile still upon his face. “Do you wish to have your punishment now, or later?”
→ ABOUT YOU. Previous Characters (if applicable): Thomas Sincade, Jane Montclaire, Frank Viggano Jr, Caleb Lance, Aloysius Carlisle, and soon to be others...
How did you find us?: Juni invited me.
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