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Adults & Children / Re: Fiodhagal Giuthaisan Duncan
« on: 19/09/2017 at 00:28 »
Hi Fiodhagal!

Your application is looking good! However, if your RP sample, you make some assumptions about Janey's looks, like her dark brown hair. If it's not mentioned in someone's post and you don't have prior knowledge of what the character currently looks like, writing that in your post is a form of powerplaying. You'll need to edit your RP sample to fix this.

Once you've made that change, please post your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Applications are closed, but if you PM me your application within 48 hours, you can still be accepted!

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Student Applications / Re: Calvin johnson application
« on: 01/09/2017 at 00:33 »
Applications are closing, but if you PM your application to me within 48 hours, you can still be accepted.

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: James Owen Peakes
« on: 31/08/2017 at 02:31 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins 01 September.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7754.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: James Owen Peakes
« on: 31/08/2017 at 02:18 »
I think that will work well enough, so I'm going to go ahead and accept this, since term is about to start. I'm going to send you a PM to discuss your backstory a little more, though.





Mr Peakes,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 September 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Sincerely,


Headmistress

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Clara Lambert Application
« on: 29/08/2017 at 01:13 »
Hi Clara!

Your application is looking good! There's just one thing I want to bring to your attention. You have Clara's birthdate as 1935 (or 1936 in her bio). Since she's a Muggleborn, she would have been impacted by an event we fondly refer to as the Time Warp. You can read more about it here. You can edit her bio to reflect what happened or you could avoid all this by making her slightly younger.

Once you've made this change, please post your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Student Applications / Re: Calvin johnson application
« on: 29/08/2017 at 01:05 »
Hi Calvin!

Thanks for your application. Before we can get you accepted, there are couple of things we'll need you to fix. In your biography, you say Calvin could make things move. Did you mean he accidentally makes things move sometimes? Or that he does this on purpose and can control it? The majority of children only use magic accidentally and have no control over it.

I'd also like to know more about Calvin's backstory. What happened to his grandmother that made him end up at an orphanage? How was he different from the other kids (besides the accidental magic)? What sort of things did he imagine to entertain himself? Since he's a muggleborn was he confused or amazed by the discovery that he was a wizard? The more information you give, the better we can sort Calvin.

Finally, you should treat your RP response as though it is a real thread. We normally don't reply to threads with nothing but dialogue. You should include more in your response, like maybe why Calvin was in the gardens, his thoughts on Hugh, or how he felt when Hugh spoke to him.

Once you've made those changes, please post your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Lecia Dorset
« on: 28/08/2017 at 13:39 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins 01 September.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7753.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Lecia Dorset
« on: 28/08/2017 at 13:38 »


Miss Dorset,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 September 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Sincerely,


Headmistress

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: James Owen Peakes
« on: 28/08/2017 at 13:26 »
Hi James!

I really enjoyed reading through your application. However, I am a little confused about the family's involvement with their muggle relations post time warp. Do they still have connections to them? Does James' father remember the time warp? I'm asking because "Muggle relations who are left behind don't have to be forgotten! However, over time it may be harder to remember what happened to them and why they aren't there. Younger versions of these people will be around if they were alive in 1937, but will be unrecognizable."

Could you clear this up for us? Thanks!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Clarence Letterman
« on: 22/08/2017 at 03:27 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins 01 September.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7746.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Clarence Letterman
« on: 22/08/2017 at 03:26 »


Mr Letterman,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 September 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Sincerely,


Headmistress

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: eva ivanov (done)
« on: 22/08/2017 at 03:24 »
Hi Eva!

Your application is coming along nicely. However, there is one thing I want to point out about your RP response. Picking up Hugh's rat without his permission is considered powerplaying. If this was a real thread (and you should respond as though it is), Hugh might have had other plans for his rat. You'll need to remove that from your response.

Once you've made that change, please post your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Chi Zeleza ➳ Student
« on: 15/08/2017 at 01:25 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins 01 September.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7719.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Chi Zeleza ➳ Student
« on: 15/08/2017 at 01:21 »


Miss Zeleza,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 September 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Sincerely,


Headmistress

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Daisy Kawaguchi
« on: 15/08/2017 at 01:04 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins 01 September.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7716.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Daisy Kawaguchi
« on: 15/08/2017 at 01:01 »


Miss Kawaguchi,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 September 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Sincerely,


Headmistress

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Student Applications / Re: Elise McHoughton
« on: 15/08/2017 at 00:53 »
Hi Elise!

Your application is coming along nicely. However, in your RP response, you're controlling the rat. Since it isn't your character's pet, you shouldn't control it. If this was a real thread, Hugh might not appreciate you making choices for his pet.

Once you've fixed your RP response, please post your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Student Applications / ACCEPTED: Rivard, Samantha
« on: 08/08/2017 at 01:49 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted. Term begins 01 September.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7700.0

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Hogwarts School Accepted / Re: Rivard, Samantha
« on: 08/08/2017 at 01:48 »


Miss Rivard,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 01 September 2017. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki. Your admission is joint for both the school and Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies. We look forward to seeing you at the Castle.


Sincerely,


Headmistress

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