Zion Thomas

[Zion Thomas]

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Name: Zion Thomas

Birthday: October 14, 1941

Hometown: Bamburg, Northumberland

Bloodline: Halfblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Divination

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): First or Fourth

Biography: Zion Thomas was born on October 14, 1941 in a small cottage on the coast of Beadnell beach in Northumberland. She is a halfblood, born to a witch named  Zubi Thomas and a muggle man named Adam Mohamed.

Her mother Zubi was the brightest witch of her age. She was known as an reserved little girl that hardly ever associated with others. During her school years, she attended and practiced at Uagadou School of Magic. Zubi received top marks in Alchemy, where she created a numerous amounts of healing elixirs. that healed her counterparts. After her school days, Zubi wanted to travel the world in search of different magic schools, but her parents wanted her to stay in her village to uphold the family’s darkest legend. Zubi raged a war within her family and village when she denied the curse of voodoo magic. She fled to South Africa where she met Adam Mohamed. After marrying Adam she went back to her home, where she was shunned by the entire village.

Muggle-born Adam lived in North America his whole childhood life. He was born in Minnesota and later when he was about 10 years old, her moved to California where he lived up into he went to highschool. During his teenage years, he lived in Texas. Adam went to school and became a doctor. Since he married Zubi Hassan, not much is known about his parents and his life in North America.

Zion has seven siblings. She has five older brothers and a younger sister. Her eldest brother AJ works as an Auror for the Ministry of Magic. Abel is in his seventh year at Hogwarts and her twin brothers Zahir and Zach are in their sixth year at Hogwarts. Her youngest sister, Elisha is only 6 years old.

Zion experienced magic at an young age. When she turned 7, she showed her first magical abilities by conjuring a small flower from her hands. Her parents didn't shy her and her siblings away from magic, instead they allowed the to embrace what is yet to come.

→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Gryffindor

Personality:At first glance, Zion is a quiet, shy girl. Living in the shadow of her older brothers, she grew to like solitary. Once you get to know her and befriend her, she could be the most fiercest, sweetest and bubblist child ever. Zion enjoys reading books (Muggle novels are her favorite). She also likes to pull pranks on other people with her brothers. She dislikes bananas and has a fear of spiders.

Appearance: Zion is a short girl with dark chocolate skin. She has brown almond eyes that coincide with her small, pointed nose. She has dark freckles on her face and hands. that compliments her skin. Zion adores her freckles and every chance she gets, she flaunts them for people to see. She has a jet black pixie cut because she didn't like to tame her previous curly, wild hair.
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→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
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Option 2: The wind blew lightly as Zion sat with her legs criss-crossed in the middle of the row of bright red flowers. She didn't particularly like flowers, but she admired their beauty and their aura of peace and serenity. They smelled wonderful as well. It was a nice day outside and what better day is it to read a good book in the sunlight? She had her copy of her favorite book and she was surrounded by nature. She couldn't have asked for more.

Zion was in a completely different world.

Her eyes was glued to each page of the book as it revealed the dark secrets of the main character. She began to fall in love with him every second. Even though her crush was only a character, Zion believed that he was a model for every single human—no matter what, they will always be a part of you hidden from the world whether it is good as light or bad as darkness.

For a tiny moment, Zion felt relatable. 

The flowers rustled a bit, interrupting her from heer thoughts. Zion looked around, searching for another person or animal, but when she didn't see anything, she thought nothing of it.. until it happened again.. and again.

Zion stood on her feet clumsily. She was beginning to get worried that something was out there in the midst of the flowers. The flowers rustled again and although she couldn't hear it, she saw it for the first time.

A cute little grey fellow zipped through the bouquets: a rat.

Zion chuckled lightly at the thought of a small rat attacking her. When the rat zipped through the flowers once more, she hurried to scoop the small animal up.

She raised the rat up, examining it close to her face. She stroked his head, deciding that she was going to keep it as a pet.

The wind picked up its pace as the flowers rustled again softly. A loud echo bounced through the air and the dirt circled around her.

Zion saw him before he could see. She quietly hid behind the flowers, holding the rat in her hands as she spied on the boy. He wiped his nose. Was he sick? Did he have allergies? He seemed grumpy about it either way.

"Can I help you with something? It is not polite to stare."


He seemed angry at her.

Provoking him seemed to be the last thing she would do.

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[Anneka Ivanova]

Hi Zion!

Welcome to our site! Your application is coming along nicely. I do have a question about your choices for what year you want Zion to be in. You have first, then fourth as a second choice. While we do our best to give everyone their first choice of year, sometimes it's not possible. I wanted to double check that fourth is what you really want, because there's a lot of difference in experiences between an 11 year old and a 14 year old.

Also, I enjoyed reading your sample RP reply. However, it appears you are controlling Hugh's rat. That's a form of powerplaying, since the pet belongs to Hugh, and if this was a real thread, his player might not appreciate that. If you could change your response so you aren't controlling the rat, that would be great!

Once you've made those changes, please post your entire revised application below, and we'll be happy to take another look!

[Zion Thomas]

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an account in your character's full name, and make sure you have read and understand the following:

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Application for Hogwarts School

→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.

Name: Zion Thomas

Birthday: October 14, 1941

Hometown: Bamburgh, Northumberland

Bloodline: Halfblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Divination

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): Third or Fourth

Biography: Zion Thomas was born on October 14, 1941 in a small cottage on the coast of Beadnell beach in Northumberland. She is a halfblood, born to a witch named  Zubi Thomas and a muggle man named Adam Mohamed.

Her mother Zubi was the brightest witch of her age. She was known as an reserved little girl that hardly ever associated with others. During her school years, she attended and practiced at Uagadou School of Magic. Zubi received top marks in Alchemy, where she created a numerous amounts of healing elixirs. that healed her counterparts. After her school days, Zubi wanted to travel the world in search of different magic schools, but her parents wanted her to stay in her village to uphold the family’s darkest legend. Zubi raged a war within her family and village. She fled to South Africa where she met Adam Mohamed. After marrying Adam she went back to her home, where she was shunned by the entire village.

Muggle-born Adam lived in North America his whole childhood life. He was born in Minnesota and later when he was about 10 years old, her moved to California where he lived up into he went to highschool. During his teenage years, he lived in Texas. Adam went to school and became a doctor. Since he married Zubi Hassan, not much is known about his parents and his life in North America.

Zion has seven siblings. She has five older brothers and a younger sister. Her eldest brother AJ works as an Auror for the Ministry of Magic. Abel is in his seventh year at Hogwarts and her twin brothers Zahir and Zach are in their sixth year at Hogwarts. Her youngest sister, Elisha is only 6 years old.

Zion experienced magic at an young age. When she turned 7, she showed her first magical abilities by conjuring a small flower from her hands. Her parents didn't shy her and her siblings away from magic, instead they allowed the to embrace what is yet to come.

→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Gryffindor
Personality: At first glance, Zion is a quiet, shy girl. Living in the shadow of her older brothers, she grew to like solitary. Once you get to know her and befriend her, she could be the most fiercest, sweetest and bubblist child ever. Zion enjoys reading books (Muggle novels are her favorite). She also likes to pull pranks on other people with her brothers. She dislikes bananas and has a fear of spiders.

Appearance: Zion is a short girl with dark chocolate skin. She has brown almond eyes that coincide with her small, pointed nose. She has dark freckles on her face and hands. that compliments her skin. Zion adores her freckles and every chance she gets, she flaunts them for people to see. She has a jet black pixie cut because she didn't like to tame her previous curly, wild hair.

→ RETURNING STUDENTS.
Note: This section is only for students who have been previously played at Hogwarts. Please see here for more information about Castle Dropouts levels/how many levels you are eligible to claim.

Link to your last levels request (if you never posted one, link to your last accepted student application):

Number of New Levels Requested:

New Levels Request:

How your character kept up with their studies: Whether your character was still at Hogwarts or left school entirely for a while, tell us how they were able to keep up with their studies and learn about magic, which would allow their levels to keep increasing.

→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
You come across one of these posts on the site. Please select one & reply as your character. Remember, you can only roleplay your own character's actions, not Evangeline's or Hugh's.


Option 2: The wind blew lightly as Zion sat with her legs criss-crossed in the middle of the row of bright red flowers. She didn't particularly like flowers, but she admired their beauty and their aura of peace and serenity. They smelled wonderful as well. It was a nice day outside and what better day is it to read a good book in the sunlight? She had her copy of her favorite book and she was surrounded by nature. She couldn't have asked for more.

Zion was in a completely different world.

Her eyes was glued to each page of the book as it revealed the dark secrets of the main character. She began to fall in love with him every second. Even though her crush was only a character, Zion believed that he was a model for every single human—no matter what, they will always be a part of you hidden from the world whether it is good as light or bad as darkness.

For a tiny moment, Zion felt relatable. 

The flowers rustled a bit, interrupting her from her thoughts. Zion looked around, searching for another person or animal, but when she didn't see anything, she thought nothing of it.. until it happened again.. and again.

Zion stood on her feet clumsily. She was beginning to get worried that something was out there in the midst of the flowers. The flowers rustled again and although she couldn't hear it, she saw it for the first time.

A cute little grey fellow: a rat.

Zion chuckled lightly at the thought of a small rat attacking her. She scooped the small animal up.She raised the rat up, examining it close to her face. She stroked his head, deciding that she was going to keep it as a pet.

The wind picked up its pace as the flowers rustled again softly. A loud echo bounced through the air and the dirt circled around her.

Zion saw him before he could see. She quietly hid behind the flowers, holding the rat in her hands as she spied on the boy. Zion realized the noise coming from the flowers was the boy walking through them. He wiped his nose. Was he sick? Did he have allergies? He seemed grumpy about it either way.

"Can I help you with something? It is not polite to stare."
 
He seemed angry at her.

Provoking him seemed to be the last thing she would do.



→ ABOUT YOU.

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[Calypso Ross]

Hi, Zion!

Your application looks good, there's just a couple of things you'll still need to edit.

Firstly, now that you've changed your year preferences, Zion's birth year is now a few years out. She'll have been born in 1939 if she's a third year (or 1938 if she's fourth).

Secondly, in your RP sample, you're still controlling Hugh's rat, which might be considered a form of powerplay. You'll need to remove the following lines from your RP sample before we can accept you:

She scooped the small animal up.She raised the rat up, examining it close to her face. She stroked his head, deciding that she was going to keep it as a pet.

holding the rat in her hands as she spied on the boy.

You can definitely have Zion attempt to pick up the rat instead (e.g. 'Zion attempted to scoop the small animal up, hoping she could keep it as a pet'), if that's something you'd like her to do. However, it would ultimately be up to Hugh's player whether his rat allows itself to be caught, so you can't decide whether she actually manages to pick the rat up.

Once you've made the required changes, please repost your entire revised application below, and we'll be more than happy to take another look. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions. Thanks!

[Zion Thomas]

Before you begin, please make sure you have created
an account in your character's full name, and make sure you have read and understand the following:

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Should you have any questions, please contact an Administrator.

Application for Hogwarts School

→ CHARACTER INFORMATION.

Name: Zion Thomas

Birthday: October 14, 1939

Hometown: Bamburgh, Northumberland

Bloodline: Halfblood

Magical Strength (pick one): Divination

Magical Weakness (pick one): Transfiguration

Year (pick two): Third or Fourth

Biography: Zion Thomas was born on October 14, 1941 in a small cottage on the coast of Beadnell beach in Northumberland. She is a halfblood, born to a witch named  Zubi Thomas and a muggle man named Adam Mohamed.

Her mother Zubi was the brightest witch of her age. She was known as an reserved little girl that hardly ever associated with others. During her school years, she attended and practiced at Uagadou School of Magic. Zubi received top marks in Alchemy, where she created a numerous amounts of healing elixirs. that healed her counterparts. After her school days, Zubi wanted to travel the world in search of different magic schools, but her parents wanted her to stay in her village to uphold the family’s darkest legend. Zubi raged a war within her family and village. She fled to South Africa where she met Adam Mohamed. After marrying Adam she went back to her home, where she was shunned by the entire village.

Muggle-born Adam lived in North America his whole childhood life. He was born in Minnesota and later when he was about 10 years old, her moved to California where he lived up into he went to highschool. During his teenage years, he lived in Texas. Adam went to school and became a doctor. Since he married Zubi Hassan, not much is known about his parents and his life in North America.

Zion has seven siblings. She has five older brothers and a younger sister. Her eldest brother AJ works as an Auror for the Ministry of Magic. Abel is in his seventh year at Hogwarts and her twin brothers Zahir and Zach are in their sixth year at Hogwarts. Her youngest sister, Elisha is only 6 years old.

Zion experienced magic at an young age. When she turned 7, she showed her first magical abilities by conjuring a small flower from her hands. Her parents didn't shy her and her siblings away from magic, instead they allowed the to embrace what is yet to come.

→ ADDITIONAL INFORMATION.
Note: This section is optional, and is up to you to complete.

House Request: Gryffindor
Personality: At first glance, Zion is a quiet, shy girl. Living in the shadow of her older brothers, she grew to like solitary. Once you get to know her and befriend her, she could be the most fiercest, sweetest and bubblist child ever. Zion enjoys reading books (Muggle novels are her favorite). She also likes to pull pranks on other people with her brothers. She dislikes bananas and has a fear of spiders.

Appearance: Zion is a short girl with dark chocolate skin. She has brown almond eyes that coincide with her small, pointed nose. She has dark freckles on her face and hands. that compliments her skin. Zion adores her freckles and every chance she gets, she flaunts them for people to see. She has a jet black pixie cut because she didn't like to tame her previous curly, wild hair.

→ RETURNING STUDENTS.
Note: This section is only for students who have been previously played at Hogwarts. Please see here for more information about Castle Dropouts levels/how many levels you are eligible to claim.

Link to your last levels request (if you never posted one, link to your last accepted student application):

Number of New Levels Requested:

New Levels Request:

How your character kept up with their studies: Whether your character was still at Hogwarts or left school entirely for a while, tell us how they were able to keep up with their studies and learn about magic, which would allow their levels to keep increasing.

→ SAMPLE ROLEPLAY.
You come across one of these posts on the site. Please select one & reply as your character. Remember, you can only roleplay your own character's actions, not Evangeline's or Hugh's.

Option 2:The wind blew lightly as Zion sat with her legs criss-crossed in the middle of the row of bright red flowers. She didn't particularly like flowers, but she admired their beauty and their aura of peace and serenity. They smelled wonderful as well. It was a nice day outside and what better day is it to read a good book in the sunlight? She had her copy of her favorite book and she was surrounded by nature. She couldn't have asked for more.

Zion was in a completely different world.

Her eyes was glued to each page of the book as it revealed the dark secrets of the main character. She began to fall in love with him every second. Even though her crush was only a character, Zion believed that he was a model for every single human—no matter what, they will always be a part of you hidden from the world whether it is good as light or bad as darkness.

For a tiny moment, Zion felt relatable. 

The flowers rustled a bit, interrupting her from her thoughts. Zion looked around, searching for another person or animal, but when she didn't see anything, she thought nothing of it.. until it happened again.. and again.

Zion stood on her feet clumsily. She was beginning to get worried that something was out there in the midst of the flowers. The flowers rustled again and although she couldn't hear it, she saw it for the first time.

A cute little grey fellow: a rat.

Zion chuckled lightly at the thought of a small rat attacking her. Zion attempted to scoop the small animal up, hoping she would keep it as a pet.

The wind picked up its pace as the flowers rustled again softly. A loud echo bounced through the air and the dirt circled around her.

Zion saw him before he could see her. She quietly hid behind the flowers. Zion realized the noise coming from the flowers was the boy walking through them. He wiped his nose. Was he sick? Did he have allergies? He seemed grumpy about it either way.

"Can I help you with something? It is not polite to stare."
 
He seemed angry at her.

Provoking him seemed to be the last thing she would do.


→ ABOUT YOU.

Please list any characters you have  on the site (current and previous): n/a

How did you find us?: Google

[Marina Lamont]

Miss Thomas,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.

Term begins 1 September. Currently, students have gathered at Camp Loki, and we encourage you to spend your summer there. Should you choose, you may also visit our Elsewhere board via the Floo Network to visit or purchase school supplies.

Yours sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress