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Adults & Children / ACCEPTED: Myfi Cadwallader
« on: 29/05/2017 at 23:25 »
Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7619.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Myfi Cadwallader
« on: 29/05/2017 at 23:25 »
Accepted!

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Adults & Children / Re: Ryder Aarons/Elsewhere Teen
« on: 29/05/2017 at 23:22 »
Hi Ryder!

I enjoyed reading your application. However before we can accept you, there are a few things we'll need you to change.

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Olivia was a prefect

This site has been around for a really long time and so these positions have actually been filled by played characters. It's not fair to them for other people to say their character (or character's family members) had this role. We'll need you to remove that.

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His head of house was the one that stepped in and made sure he did not fail out of school. They made him come to their office to do homework and he wouldn’t leave until it was satisfactory.

Again, this is a position that someone is actually playing. Once you apply Ryder to Hogwarts and get sorted, whoever ends up as his head of house might be willing to allow this in Ryder's backstory. Until then, you'll either need to remove the paragraph about his head of house or change it to say something less specific, like 'a staff member'.

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The summer after Laden was gone he was sent to live with his grandparents in London, who were muggles,

At fifteen years old, Ryder would have been born before the Time Warp happened. This means either his muggle grandparents would no longer be around or they managed to get moved back in time as well.

Once you make those changes, please post your entire revised application below, and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: New Start?
« on: 29/05/2017 at 23:03 »
That's great that you want to start playing her again! While you can't reapply for Hogwarts until August 1st, you can absolutely jump back in to playing her on the Elsewhere board. You still have your access there and it's always open, so I would suggest going that route.

I'm looking forward to seeing you back playing on the boards again!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Myfi Cadwallader
« on: 22/05/2017 at 12:39 »
Hi Myfi!

I really enjoyed reading your application! There is just one thing before we can accept your application. You have some very minor instances of powerplaying in your RP response, like  "releasing his hand and brushing her own down his back". While this isn't a real thread, once you do start doing those with other people, they might not appreciate you making those little assumptions like that he took her hand or didn't jerk away when she stepped closer.

Once you fix that, please post your entire revised application below and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Hi Creon!

I enjoyed reading your application. However, there are some changes that we'll need you to make before we can accept you.

You should treat the RP sample as though it's a real thread and Joshua will reply to what you write. In your response, you are controlling what Joshua does, which is called powerplaying. If this was a real thread, Joshua's player would be really upset that you made these decisions for him. We'll need you to rewrite your response so you are only controlling Creon.

If you need some examples of how to do this, check our our sample applications.

Once you've made these changes, please post your entire revised application below, and we'll be happy to take another look!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7581.0

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Accepted!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7570.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Simon Bukowski | Elsewhere Child
« on: 04/05/2017 at 13:38 »
Accepted!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7563.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Rosemary Carter | Homeless Urchin
« on: 02/05/2017 at 02:14 »
Accepted!

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Congratulations! This application has been accepted.

http://hogwarts-school.net/sortinghat/index.php?topic=7528.0

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Winifred Llewellyn \\ Adult App
« on: 02/05/2017 at 02:09 »
Accepted!

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Student Applications / Re: Daphne Alanis-Byrne
« on: 01/05/2017 at 02:15 »
Applications are now closed, but if you PM me your revised application within 48 hours of this post, we can still get you accepted.

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Student Applications / Re: Student Application: Lucas Cho
« on: 01/05/2017 at 02:14 »
Applications are now closed, but if you PM me your revised application within 48 hours of this post, we can still get you accepted.

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Applications are now closed, but if you PM me your revised application within 48 hours of this post, we can still get you accepted.

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Student Applications / Re: Gail Grey Student Application
« on: 01/05/2017 at 02:12 »
Applications are now closed, but if you PM me your revised application within 48 hours of this post, we can still get you accepted.

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Student Applications / Re: Application
« on: 01/05/2017 at 02:11 »
Applications are now closed, but if you PM me your revised application within 48 hours of this post, we can still get you accepted.

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