Hi Anastasia, and welcome to HS.net! Your application looks like it's off to a great start. However, there are a couple of things I'd like to address before we can get you all accepted.
Your biography is very short and doesn't tell us much at all about Anastasia as a character. We typically ask for 100 words for 1st, 2nd, and 3rd year bios, and 300 words for students older than that. This is to make sure we understand who your character is, what makes her special, and - most importantly - where she might fit best when it comes time to sort.
If you could please flesh out Anastasia's biography - tell us how she feels about her family, maybe, or how she feels about her magical abilities - and post a revised application, we'd be happy to take another look.
Thanks!
- Izzy