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Messages - Viola Ross

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Fletcher J. Grimwood, Adult
« on: 11/05/2016 at 17:48 »
Hi Fletcher!

Your application looks wonderful - I have just one small thing for you to take another look at.

In your roleplay response, I noticed you've written in present tense. Here on the site, we write in third person past tense - i.e. 'stood' rather than 'stands'; 'held' rather than 'holds', etc. Please change your response to be in the past tense rather than the present.

If you could kindly repost your edited application below, we'll be happy to take another look!

--Vi

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Lacey Avalon-Elsewhere Adult
« on: 11/05/2016 at 17:37 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Rosalie Peters
« on: 11/05/2016 at 17:31 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Rosalie Peters
« on: 06/05/2016 at 05:36 »
Hi Rosalie!

Just one tiny thing--when setting your magical levels, we require that to start, your lowest magical ability be no lower than half your highest (rounded down). Therefore, Rosalie's Charms level would need to be lowered to at least 11, or her Divination level would need to come up to at least 6. For example, you could take a point from Transfiguration and add it to Divination, giving you 12, 6, 7, and 7. Either way, just make sure you're only using a total of 32 points! :)

Feel free to PM me if you have questions!

--Vi

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Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Cyrus Galanis -- Elsewhere Adult
« on: 06/05/2016 at 05:18 »
Accepted!

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Archived Applications / Re: Lily Rosary, Elsewhere Adult
« on: 06/05/2016 at 05:15 »
Hey Lily!

Your application is looking great--I just have one thing for you to take another look at.

In your sample roleplay, you've written about Lily going into a shop, only to come back out and see that Amelia is missing. The intent of the sample reply is to write as if Amelia is just another player--that is, you wouldn't write another player's character leaving (since that would be considered powerplaying), or moving time forward several hours (as this makes it confusing for Amelia to try and then reply to you). Basically, we want to see how your character would reply as if Amelia's sample post were an open thread you came across on the site.

If you could make the appropriate adjustments to the roleplay response and repost the entire application below, we'll take another look! Feel free to PM me with any questions!

--Vi

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Dolos Deorum - Elsewhere Child
« on: 06/05/2016 at 05:03 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Miriam Babel, Elsewhere Adult
« on: 06/05/2016 at 04:56 »
Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Judith Quivers || Elsewhere Child
« on: 06/05/2016 at 04:49 »
Accepted!

Just making a note here that since Judith's mother was a witch, Judith would actually be a Halfblood. Everything else looks wonderful!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Honeydukes | Shop Permit
« on: 16/01/2016 at 00:37 »
You got it, babe. ;)

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Accepted!

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Adam Lundgren- Elswere adult
« on: 16/01/2016 at 00:29 »
Hi Adam!

It looks like your biography is just short of the 300 word minimum (not counting the OOC note), so if you could just add a little bit more there, that would be great!

Thanks,
--Vi

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Archived Applications / Re: Mirabelle Notte Chocolat
« on: 19/12/2015 at 04:07 »
Hi Mirabelle! Welcome!

There are a few things we'd like you to look over before we can get you accepted.

1. Per the site rules,

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Please try and stick to the spirit of the books and maintain a sense of realism in your roleplays.

When applied to the spirit of the Harry Potter books, it isn't terribly realistic for Mira to have run away to the circus and accidentally slit her throat with a knife. While we do encourage creativity, we would like a character's backstory to be a bit more believable in relation to the setting and feel of the original work.

2. By Salem, I assume you mean Salem, Massachusetts, in the United States? If so, please add some detail about how Mira ended up in the UK and why she didn't attend Salem Institute, or another Wizarding school closer nearby.

3. You seem to have missed the roleplay response - please respond as your character would to either scenario - Hugh or Evangeline - and add that in to your application in the appropriate area.

Please post the entire modified application below, and we'll be happy to take another look.

Thanks!
--Vi

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Hi Vsevlod!

First, I'd like to suggest that you go through and thoroughly read our site rules, rating, and frequently asked questions. Those should give you a better idea of how our game works, and how you could adjust your application to abide them. You can also take a look at some sample applications and use those as a guide for what we're looking for.

Secondly, we ask that, when selecting levels for adult characters, that the lowest level is no lower than half the highest level. This would mean that to have a summoning level of 10, Vsevlod's divination level would need to be at least 5.

Please make the appropriate adjustments and post the revised application below. :)

Thanks,
--Vi

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Archived Applications / Re: Arven Westerholt
« on: 12/12/2015 at 02:20 »
Hi Arven!

I see that you've picked an RP sample to respond to! What we'd like you to do with that is, respond to it in 3rd person the way your character, Arven, would. For example, would he think it's gross that Hugh wiped his nose on his sleeve? What is he doing before Hugh speaks to him? Does Arven happen to find Merlin, Hugh's rat? Please complete this section and repost the entire application.

If you need an example, please check out the sample applications we have available for your reference.

And just another small note - the average 14-year-old probably wouldn't be able to grow a beard like the one you describe! If anything, it's probably peach-fuzz. ;)

Thanks!
--Vi

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Elsewhere Accepted / Re: Lartius Fredfort- Elsewhere Adult
« on: 05/12/2015 at 17:03 »
Accepted!

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Archived Applications / Re: Teejay Goulding
« on: 03/12/2015 at 19:29 »
Hi Teejay! Your application is looking fabulous - I just have a couple quick things before we can get you accepted!

1. I assume that in a couple spots in your biography, you meant to say 'muggle' (non-magical person) instead of 'muggleborn' (witch or wizard born to muggle parents)? I'd just like to make sure I have it right, for clarity's sake! For example -

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Teejay have an only friend, his name was Mark. He was a Muggleborn.

Is Teejay's friend Mark a wizard? If not, he would be a muggle!

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He was confused, shocked. Knowing that he was just a mere Muggleborn.

From what's written in the rest of your biography, Teejay grew up believing that he was a muggle, rather than a muggleborn. If you could clarify and/or correct those things, that would be wonderful!

2. When writing your sample roleplay, rather than make up your own (which is fabulous, by the way!), we'd like you to respond to one of two pre-written posts - either Evangeline's or Hugh's. They can be found in the application template, here!

Please post your corrected application in its entirety as a reply to this thread! If you have any questions, please let me know, and I look forward to having you on the site!

Cheers,
--Vi

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Suggestions & Questions / Re: Plot...
« on: 02/12/2015 at 21:57 »
Hey Ariel! I've got a number of options for you, hang tight!

  • The Hexenreich! As an active member of the site, you're entitled to play a member of the Hexenreich - the wizarding collective that has now taken over Britain. The vast majority are adult characters of German or French ancestry. PM Viola Ross if you're interested!
  • The Resistance movement! An underground group made up of former MOD soldiers and disgruntled civilians, the Resistance aims to take back Wizarding Britain and put a stop to the Hexenreich occupation. Resistance members participate in missions designed to undermine the rule of the Hexenreich. If you have a character who would be a good fit, please PM Aries Paladin!
  • Hogwarts interrogations! If you have a student you'd like to be bullied, interrogated, or otherwise terrorized by the Hexenreich while at school, please PM Aries Paladin!
  • Personal plots! We are always eager to hear about any personal plots that might tie into our larger plot. Whether you just want a Hexenreich character to make an appearance or have information the Resistance would be interested in, please feel free to reach out to any staff member!

I hope that helps!

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Accepted.

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